for Reflections of a Different Path7/2/2015 c9 Kitten Arina
It almost feels as if you just gave up between this and the last chapter. Yea you must have been planning to take even longer since I have no clue as to how long you are referring to with your author note at the bottom of your chapter.
It almost feels as if you just gave up between this and the last chapter. Yea you must have been planning to take even longer since I have no clue as to how long you are referring to with your author note at the bottom of your chapter.
7/2/2015 c5 Kitten Arina
I personally wish you would lengthen your stories because I have to scroll past have of the screen just before I can start reading the story. And I personally just hate that because I find that there is to much wasted space on things if that is how long it takes me to just get to the start of the actual story. That and if each chapter was in an ebook format and sold at $2.99 I would feel ripped off.
I personally wish you would lengthen your stories because I have to scroll past have of the screen just before I can start reading the story. And I personally just hate that because I find that there is to much wasted space on things if that is how long it takes me to just get to the start of the actual story. That and if each chapter was in an ebook format and sold at $2.99 I would feel ripped off.
7/2/2015 c4 Kitten Arina
It appears that you need to focus a little more on the editing aspect of your story at the beginning of this story you use It just seemed to know. When I believe that you mean I just seemed to know. Also it would be nice if you could lengthen your chapters and in my personal opinion it would be nice if you included a line break right before you type Chapter 1 or Chapter 10 just for example it would break the story away from the notes at the top so much more then the way that it currently is.
It appears that you need to focus a little more on the editing aspect of your story at the beginning of this story you use It just seemed to know. When I believe that you mean I just seemed to know. Also it would be nice if you could lengthen your chapters and in my personal opinion it would be nice if you included a line break right before you type Chapter 1 or Chapter 10 just for example it would break the story away from the notes at the top so much more then the way that it currently is.
7/2/2015 c3 Kitten Arina
You are right this chapter is way to short. Some of what you listed for your reasons are understandable but at the same time sound nothing more then excuses because of how many others out there make the same sort of claim. I am not trying to undermind you nor call you a liar I am just simply stating what I am feeling about your reasons when it come to short chapters especially shorter then the normally short ones that came before it.
You are right this chapter is way to short. Some of what you listed for your reasons are understandable but at the same time sound nothing more then excuses because of how many others out there make the same sort of claim. I am not trying to undermind you nor call you a liar I am just simply stating what I am feeling about your reasons when it come to short chapters especially shorter then the normally short ones that came before it.
7/2/2015 c2 Kitten Arina
The chapters are a bit short for my personal liking but I can say they are written well for the most part. You could do with a little better editing as I am sure After is spelled with an f and not an l.
The chapters are a bit short for my personal liking but I can say they are written well for the most part. You could do with a little better editing as I am sure After is spelled with an f and not an l.
7/2/2015 c1 Kitten Arina
Enjoyed? Sadly it is to early to tell if I enjoyed the story. I say so far you have gain my interest in the story. You leave it unclear if Ranma ends up with an actual curse at the moment and it just wouldn't be a worthy story of the Ranma universe if he didn't end up with a curse. But just because I am unsure of if I have enjoyed the story I must thank you for this interesting story so far.
Enjoyed? Sadly it is to early to tell if I enjoyed the story. I say so far you have gain my interest in the story. You leave it unclear if Ranma ends up with an actual curse at the moment and it just wouldn't be a worthy story of the Ranma universe if he didn't end up with a curse. But just because I am unsure of if I have enjoyed the story I must thank you for this interesting story so far.
8/20/2012 c9 kellywright.6645
I love the storie and how you wrote it even with the large amount of errors that i saw in some of the words used in the chapters that you had, Can't wait to see how you work your way up to where Essense/R ANKO finally gets her memory back about her mother and if its in the ( plan ) storie goes to see her mother and meet's the Tendo family and delivers the sad news of Genma Saotome's Honorable death saving her life at the pool's in china. Keep up the good work, o.k.
I love the storie and how you wrote it even with the large amount of errors that i saw in some of the words used in the chapters that you had, Can't wait to see how you work your way up to where Essense/R ANKO finally gets her memory back about her mother and if its in the ( plan ) storie goes to see her mother and meet's the Tendo family and delivers the sad news of Genma Saotome's Honorable death saving her life at the pool's in china. Keep up the good work, o.k.
2/11/2012 c8 Ranmaleopard
this is really awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!
this is really awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!
12/17/2010 c9 
2GeorgeTobor
Nice story, but its not about Ranma anymore but Essence. Still she is an interesting character so I hope you continue it.
2GeorgeToborNice story, but its not about Ranma anymore but Essence. Still she is an interesting character so I hope you continue it.
1/14/2010 c9 Pryde Kitty
This was a short, but sweet chapter. It's interesting to see Ranma having so much fun as Essence. I am curious to see where you are going with all of this ^^
This was a short, but sweet chapter. It's interesting to see Ranma having so much fun as Essence. I am curious to see where you are going with all of this ^^
1/14/2010 c9 8Dumbledork
Heh. Had already forgotten about this fic. Great job, although I think Ranma should instinctually how to behave like a girl from all the memories she got from the elders.
8DumbledorkHeh. Had already forgotten about this fic. Great job, although I think Ranma should instinctually how to behave like a girl from all the memories she got from the elders.
5/15/2009 c8 James Birdsong
Very nice eight chapters. *cheer for the good writing and stuff* I do believe this entire thing was excellent true yep.
Very nice eight chapters. *cheer for the good writing and stuff* I do believe this entire thing was excellent true yep.
5/14/2009 c8 6Bree R
The story is interesting, and you write dialogue very well...However, the chapters are much too short and the description of setting and characters are near non-existent. If you fix those two problems up I think you'd have a much better story. To date I feel like all your chapters could fit in one larger chapter. Regardless, I like the story. The Ranma is raised by Amazon's storyline is one of my favorites and I look forward to seeing where you go with this.
6Bree RThe story is interesting, and you write dialogue very well...However, the chapters are much too short and the description of setting and characters are near non-existent. If you fix those two problems up I think you'd have a much better story. To date I feel like all your chapters could fit in one larger chapter. Regardless, I like the story. The Ranma is raised by Amazon's storyline is one of my favorites and I look forward to seeing where you go with this.
5/13/2009 c8 8Dumbledork
I like how you're taking things slow and don't rush. It's a nice insight into the workings of the village. However, I can't wait to see where you're going with this. I hope that Ranma will regain her memories one day.
8DumbledorkI like how you're taking things slow and don't rush. It's a nice insight into the workings of the village. However, I can't wait to see where you're going with this. I hope that Ranma will regain her memories one day.