for Blood Wings7/28/2009 c1 
2Paradoxismminant
Not too bad, but I was thinking...this sounds more like Trinity Blood than Bleach. Just saying.
2ParadoxismminantNot too bad, but I was thinking...this sounds more like Trinity Blood than Bleach. Just saying.
4/4/2009 c1 1firelarc
though i admit as a human being smut is awsome. this story shows originality, is writen alot better, and is awsome to read. i'm not really good at giving critiques but i did want to give you tour props and say i cant wait to read more of your original works
1firelarcthough i admit as a human being smut is awsome. this story shows originality, is writen alot better, and is awsome to read. i'm not really good at giving critiques but i did want to give you tour props and say i cant wait to read more of your original works
4/4/2009 c1 Just that one guy
thise story sounds really cool but also a bit like maximum ride but only small bits and peices like the wings and the people hunting him down but otherwise completly self made i look forward to reading the next chapter
thise story sounds really cool but also a bit like maximum ride but only small bits and peices like the wings and the people hunting him down but otherwise completly self made i look forward to reading the next chapter