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8/14/2010 c11 jwsk91
hey dork work on your grammar and it was the anniversary present not birthday.

Love ya,

Your personal Edward ;)
4/11/2010 c12 5xXLove Me xx Hate MeXx
I think you should just continue from where you left off!
4/10/2010 c11 xXLove Me xx Hate MeXx
please write more this is the best one Ive read! AND IVE READ ALOT!
2/28/2010 c5 Cidney Marshall
I love ur story so far but I think you should make the chapters longer.
2/27/2010 c11 pmk kelly
like this story but i wish the chapters were longer it took me 5 mins to read this story
7/16/2009 c11 jenny14
i loving this story update soon
1/29/2009 c1 4Glittercups69
Ok Glittercups gone serious, um I love you longer chapter and I will help edit it's a great story but it needs more zing! I'm mean that kind of zing you get when you eat an orange! ZING! =d love you! can't wait till next update!
1/24/2009 c7 3Reaching Out
Cute kid.
1/24/2009 c6 Reaching Out
do you think you could make your chapters longer. It was okay but short.
1/24/2009 c5 Reaching Out
Jane's nice? Thats a twist.
1/24/2009 c4 Reaching Out
Stupid Bella!
1/24/2009 c3 Reaching Out
Cool chapter. Love it.
1/24/2009 c2 Reaching Out
That was short. Pretty none-descriptive also.

r.0.
1/24/2009 c1 Reaching Out
She doesn't seem sad enough in your depiction.

Charlie is how you spell it.

-r.0.
1/15/2009 c5 1blackstargem
I can't wait till you update! :D
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