
1/15/2016 c5 15mbrown2
Awesome reference to Twilight. Great connection. Surprised that Bella still dreams of Edward
Awesome reference to Twilight. Great connection. Surprised that Bella still dreams of Edward
6/5/2015 c8
1jasmine.n.underwood
Please continue this awesome story it keeps getting better and better

Please continue this awesome story it keeps getting better and better
1/11/2014 c8 Guest
write more please :)
write more please :)
1/8/2013 c2 nia
i now what a prick .
i now what a prick .
9/18/2009 c3 Jane
this is is really good keep on with the story i like it a lot
this is is really good keep on with the story i like it a lot
6/13/2009 c4 fred frm the sky
the word ur lookin 4 is frazzled
the word ur lookin 4 is frazzled
5/31/2009 c8 Laurel
Now I'm really confused. She got reincarnated? Really... what the heck? This is all really disorienting. Get a beta or revamp this or both, PLEASE.
Now I'm really confused. She got reincarnated? Really... what the heck? This is all really disorienting. Get a beta or revamp this or both, PLEASE.
5/31/2009 c7 Laurel
I am having an extremely hard time reading this and I can't hear the characters talking with all the bold/italicized writing going on.
I am having an extremely hard time reading this and I can't hear the characters talking with all the bold/italicized writing going on.
5/31/2009 c6 Laurel
I have to be boring you by now... I don't think the bold/italicized speaking adds to the story. Honestly, it made it harder for me to read, and I don't even have eye problems.
I have to be boring you by now... I don't think the bold/italicized speaking adds to the story. Honestly, it made it harder for me to read, and I don't even have eye problems.
5/31/2009 c5 Laurel
Your chapters are really short. This isn't sounding like an asylum at all... They're supposed to HELP you, right?
Your chapters are really short. This isn't sounding like an asylum at all... They're supposed to HELP you, right?
5/31/2009 c4 Laurel
Hi. This is really very like the other chapters, so I don't have much to say. Thanks for teaching me the word "fraggled". Can they really put patients in "the white room" just for telling the truth?
Hi. This is really very like the other chapters, so I don't have much to say. Thanks for teaching me the word "fraggled". Can they really put patients in "the white room" just for telling the truth?
5/31/2009 c3 Laurel
Okay, there are some spelling errors here, possibly typos. Try a spell-check, or maybe just look it over closely. Also, there are some places that could use commas. Also you could describe what is going on in more detail, I can't "see" much here.
Okay, there are some spelling errors here, possibly typos. Try a spell-check, or maybe just look it over closely. Also, there are some places that could use commas. Also you could describe what is going on in more detail, I can't "see" much here.