for Lost Pack12/5/2010 c13 
4xX.Insane.Mutt.Xx
Hey how you going..?
Just thought I'd write a review for you cause I think this story is amazing! I love it. It's a little different from the other fanfic stories I'm use to reading (even though i regretfully haven't been reading lately) which is good because everything seemed to be blending into eachother.
Anyway, I love this story and I really hope you update adn finish this soon. Have fun adn good luck.
Love ya
xX.Insane.Mutt.Xx
Mwahz xoxox
4xX.Insane.Mutt.XxHey how you going..?
Just thought I'd write a review for you cause I think this story is amazing! I love it. It's a little different from the other fanfic stories I'm use to reading (even though i regretfully haven't been reading lately) which is good because everything seemed to be blending into eachother.
Anyway, I love this story and I really hope you update adn finish this soon. Have fun adn good luck.
Love ya
xX.Insane.Mutt.Xx
Mwahz xoxox
11/29/2010 c13 crawfish4
I'm sorry you are stuck :'( THAT is the reason I don't write at all lol. And I wish I could help you but I am not creative in any way at all... well other than insulting people :D
I'm sorry you are stuck :'( THAT is the reason I don't write at all lol. And I wish I could help you but I am not creative in any way at all... well other than insulting people :D
11/26/2010 c13 Kaitlyn19
Loved it! This story is amazing:D lol I almost cried when Jacob died:( but I wish she and Paul would get together and keep the baby:) Oh and love Avo and Keenan they're my new favourite characters:D
please update soon!
Loved it! This story is amazing:D lol I almost cried when Jacob died:( but I wish she and Paul would get together and keep the baby:) Oh and love Avo and Keenan they're my new favourite characters:D
please update soon!
10/5/2010 c11 kitsune-rogue
wtf why did he die! jacobs not supposed to die! he just doesnt its UNNATURAL! i seriously nearly cried!
wtf why did he die! jacobs not supposed to die! he just doesnt its UNNATURAL! i seriously nearly cried!
8/28/2010 c12 5Perfect love kills all fear
please please please update soon. It's been forever. I know you realize that...I reread the story. I got sad again when Jacob died. What there a funeral or something. I don't know if I'm just spazing but somehow it's like he's really not dead. I'm waiting for him to swoop in and claim Derek and Ava once again and scare away Paul's advances. I loved this story from the start(it's on my favorites for a reason) and I love Ava's character.
PLKAF
5Perfect love kills all fearplease please please update soon. It's been forever. I know you realize that...I reread the story. I got sad again when Jacob died. What there a funeral or something. I don't know if I'm just spazing but somehow it's like he's really not dead. I'm waiting for him to swoop in and claim Derek and Ava once again and scare away Paul's advances. I loved this story from the start(it's on my favorites for a reason) and I love Ava's character.
PLKAF
6/2/2010 c12 3MySilentEmoSide
this is really good! i was crying when jacob died! and at other part afterwards! u r an amazing writer! update soon!
3MySilentEmoSidethis is really good! i was crying when jacob died! and at other part afterwards! u r an amazing writer! update soon!
3/26/2010 c12 crawfish4
Aw. I REALLY want Ava to keep Derek! I mean she and Paul can go to Alaska and then Derek would have a daddy and everything. SUPER SUPER SUPER cool chapter
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Aw. I REALLY want Ava to keep Derek! I mean she and Paul can go to Alaska and then Derek would have a daddy and everything. SUPER SUPER SUPER cool chapter
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3/11/2010 c11 skarpia
great story! i lvoe it. Its really good! So keep up the great writing and post more chapters ;)
great story! i lvoe it. Its really good! So keep up the great writing and post more chapters ;)