for Teddy and Victoire, All Grown Up1/28/2009 c1 
23xshrimpyx
i really really really liked it! loved it even! please write another chapter, i love the pairing t&v x
23xshrimpyxi really really really liked it! loved it even! please write another chapter, i love the pairing t&v x
1/20/2009 c1 19Mind.Caster
AW TO CUTE.
I'd keep it going, Blondie.
or update more on them!
aw...
lol.
later!
19Mind.CasterAW TO CUTE.
I'd keep it going, Blondie.
or update more on them!
aw...
lol.
later!
1/20/2009 c1 28Blue Leah
That's so sweet! You should definitely write more. I like Teddy seeing Victoire for the first time since he was away that summer.
Only thing I have a problem with is that you change verb tenses. Sometimes you write in the present tense and sometimes you write in the past tense. You need to stick to one tense throughout the entire chapter. Other than that it was a great chapter and I want to read more! Go James and good luck, Teddy!
28Blue LeahThat's so sweet! You should definitely write more. I like Teddy seeing Victoire for the first time since he was away that summer.
Only thing I have a problem with is that you change verb tenses. Sometimes you write in the present tense and sometimes you write in the past tense. You need to stick to one tense throughout the entire chapter. Other than that it was a great chapter and I want to read more! Go James and good luck, Teddy!
1/19/2009 c1 3DefyingGravitywJB
OHPLEASEOHPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE! continue the story! I love the pair so much and always wanted more of their story.
3DefyingGravitywJBOHPLEASEOHPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE! continue the story! I love the pair so much and always wanted more of their story.