
12/26/2014 c1 Guest
Just finished the story in one sitting and I have to say, I'm quite satisfied. By the end I was quivering in my pants due to ADHD and wondering wether or not Flame became the new Fire Guardian.
Just finished the story in one sitting and I have to say, I'm quite satisfied. By the end I was quivering in my pants due to ADHD and wondering wether or not Flame became the new Fire Guardian.
11/25/2014 c30 Alba
I think you should write another one. I'd love to help yoy If you agree. Send me a message.
I think you should write another one. I'd love to help yoy If you agree. Send me a message.
10/1/2014 c30 Mrpockets998
a well done story but Spyro seems quite underwhelming in basically all the fight scenes.
a well done story but Spyro seems quite underwhelming in basically all the fight scenes.
9/18/2014 c24 carter
beautiful story, love it soooo much! as myself, i am a MASSIVE spyro fanboy, and im so happy theyre is others that like it too!
beautiful story, love it soooo much! as myself, i am a MASSIVE spyro fanboy, and im so happy theyre is others that like it too!
9/9/2014 c30
8Lord Lucien the Marchosias
A excellent work my friend. You really got everyone's personally, I really liked Spyro and Cynder personally most.
Ever thought making this to a comic or something like that because this is really good.
Well bye from OneeyedHunter96.

A excellent work my friend. You really got everyone's personally, I really liked Spyro and Cynder personally most.
Ever thought making this to a comic or something like that because this is really good.
Well bye from OneeyedHunter96.
5/1/2014 c9 BlackAlbatross1
WHAAAAT?! FOR THE SHAKE OF THE GOD, WHY DON'T YOU KISS! (after read the end of chap 9)
WHAAAAT?! FOR THE SHAKE OF THE GOD, WHY DON'T YOU KISS! (after read the end of chap 9)
4/30/2014 c30 BlackAlbatross1
Suggestion? Hm... This is my idea for my upcoming story. How about this: UNSC arrives Spyro and Cynder's planet, with 117 aboard? :))
Suggestion? Hm... This is my idea for my upcoming story. How about this: UNSC arrives Spyro and Cynder's planet, with 117 aboard? :))
4/19/2014 c1 Lord Feelihipo
Um I have to say I plainly love this, I loved the series, the games and every character, especially my Cynder, I would appreciate if you could turn this into an ebook so I could read before going to bed, because computers aren't exactly the best, but I'd love to read this on my tablet, please reply!
Um I have to say I plainly love this, I loved the series, the games and every character, especially my Cynder, I would appreciate if you could turn this into an ebook so I could read before going to bed, because computers aren't exactly the best, but I'd love to read this on my tablet, please reply!
4/18/2014 c30
1Nathen The Protector
Um... That was confusing. If you can please come back to this and add something to show perspective change. Please.

Um... That was confusing. If you can please come back to this and add something to show perspective change. Please.
3/9/2014 c5 Guest
You make the best fanfiction stories ever
You make the best fanfiction stories ever
3/8/2014 c1 Guest
Let me say it thing on the web.️️️️️️seriously you have to make a sequel
Let me say it thing on the web.️️️️️️seriously you have to make a sequel
3/8/2014 c30 Guest
I think good job
I think good job