6/3/2009 c1 12Kamitose
I honestly swore I've reviewed this before when I read it months ago but I guess I was wrong. Any who, this story is excellent and very very heart wrenching. But it brings up a good point as well. What will happen to those affected by Soul Edge when the sword is destroyed. And unfortunately the ones that Cassandra cared for most suffered the most from her otherwise noble actions. You portrayed this well. The angst was extremely well written. Good job. :D

1/21/2009 c1 8mastersam
You know I'm honestly not that big of a fan of Raph/Cass pairings. In fact, with how badly some of them I've seen are written, I've grown a rather large distaste for them; for that, I had avoided reading this for a little while. But, considering that you come by and read my own story, I felt obliged to at least do so for your own work.

And, I must say, even with the pairing, I'm impressed. You really went in with the details of how she felt when each emotion came in, whether it washed over, or jolted her, however; I was able to discern how she came to feel. And that, in this one, seems to be the most important factor, which I think you nailed on the spot. Bravo!

1/21/2009 c1 11occasionallyme
Hey, this is really good. And for all your warnings of its "all-around clumsiness", I actually enjoyed this a lot. It's a different take on the Raph/Cass pairing, what with you exploring a bit on the swords' destruction and the effect it has on those tainted with Soul Edge's darkness... *faves*