for Time for a change7/24/2019 c1 
4XeraQ
HI! Thanks for your review on my update just now! I tried to send you the link but it said you have disabled private messages. Let me know if you still want the link and if you can bypass it. :) thanks for your readership!
4XeraQHI! Thanks for your review on my update just now! I tried to send you the link but it said you have disabled private messages. Let me know if you still want the link and if you can bypass it. :) thanks for your readership!
11/22/2013 c1 overninethousand
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12/6/2012 c1 Random Chick
-PLEEAASSEE, Work on your grammar and your format! You're killing me here! Your story is good, it's just that how it's written/presented here makes me want to stab myself. Repeatedly. Get a beta, quick, and maybe you'll get more reviews, positive ones.
-Other than that, I like your story! You have great material, just work on fixing your mistakes so it's in proper written format.
-PLEEAASSEE, Work on your grammar and your format! You're killing me here! Your story is good, it's just that how it's written/presented here makes me want to stab myself. Repeatedly. Get a beta, quick, and maybe you'll get more reviews, positive ones.
-Other than that, I like your story! You have great material, just work on fixing your mistakes so it's in proper written format.
6/15/2010 c4 2meravina
oh my god u have to finish this story im gonna be so deppressed now please! i am so begging u im on my nees here im just gonna have a haert acttke if u dont pleeeeessssseeee!
2meravinaoh my god u have to finish this story im gonna be so deppressed now please! i am so begging u im on my nees here im just gonna have a haert acttke if u dont pleeeeessssseeee!
9/29/2009 c3 Aein Valentine
Nice,i thought u quit the story but its nice to see you returned with a good new chapter cant wait to see what happens next =]
Nice,i thought u quit the story but its nice to see you returned with a good new chapter cant wait to see what happens next =]
1/26/2009 c2 1sesshyrinlove92
it waz cut lolz but wen did they have kids and who are the kids dads i kno im askin much but im kinda lost even if it a good story
1sesshyrinlove92it waz cut lolz but wen did they have kids and who are the kids dads i kno im askin much but im kinda lost even if it a good story
1/24/2009 c2 7Zemire
I think you are one of the few authors I've ever wrote more than 2 reviews per story but i have to admit it is a wonderful story and I like where you're going with it Keep up the good work ...oh and thank you for mentioning me in your introduction I appreciate it
7ZemireI think you are one of the few authors I've ever wrote more than 2 reviews per story but i have to admit it is a wonderful story and I like where you're going with it Keep up the good work ...oh and thank you for mentioning me in your introduction I appreciate it
1/21/2009 c1 Zemire
I really like your story but i got so confused i didn't know who was saying what maybe you could start a new line whenever a character say something or use "quotations" sorry i sound like a teacher but i just love your story and where it's headed
I really like your story but i got so confused i didn't know who was saying what maybe you could start a new line whenever a character say something or use "quotations" sorry i sound like a teacher but i just love your story and where it's headed