11/2/2010 c3 freakyhurt
hey,your story are so sweet...its makes me almost wanna cry...
hey,your story are so sweet...its makes me almost wanna cry...
10/9/2010 c1 justplainoldme24
Now that I am a critic I still love this story and it's truly romantic between two. I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! ***** like i said i would give you five stars if i was a critic and now i am. BE HAPPY! BE PROUD! BE A FANFICTION WRITER! :)
Now that I am a critic I still love this story and it's truly romantic between two. I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! ***** like i said i would give you five stars if i was a critic and now i am. BE HAPPY! BE PROUD! BE A FANFICTION WRITER! :)
8/29/2010 c3 justplainoldme24
Oh...what a romantic yet sad for Mary story...I wish (i add this to my collection of wishes) this could happen to me...minus the hook worm. Excellent job! 5 stars... if i was a critic
Oh...what a romantic yet sad for Mary story...I wish (i add this to my collection of wishes) this could happen to me...minus the hook worm. Excellent job! 5 stars... if i was a critic
3/17/2010 c1 1RhythmicalMusa
PLZ MAKE MORE CHAPTERS OF THIS STORY! i want to know more of it plz :D
and thank u for creating this story, so plz plz make more chapters =D
PLZ MAKE MORE CHAPTERS OF THIS STORY! i want to know more of it plz :D
and thank u for creating this story, so plz plz make more chapters =D
9/14/2009 c3 NoElGoTsOnE
Oh,great!Did you ever think of making a squel?Or how ever u spell it?That would be awesome:)
Oh,great!Did you ever think of making a squel?Or how ever u spell it?That would be awesome:)
4/20/2009 c2 GG7HEverwoodHSMfan
aw! very cute ending! but man, some of this is gross and disgusting. dont get me wrong, i love the story, im just saying. lol! =D
aw! very cute ending! but man, some of this is gross and disgusting. dont get me wrong, i love the story, im just saying. lol! =D