for Now1/6/2019 c2 daisuke
hot... great!
hot... great!
3/23/2018 c2 Guest
Best bro write like this more and often
Best bro write like this more and often
11/11/2017 c2 Guest
Great! You have a knack and a talent for this type of thing. If only this could happen and be called canon... go narusaku
Great! You have a knack and a talent for this type of thing. If only this could happen and be called canon... go narusaku
6/28/2016 c2 Kynah
I thoroughly enjoyed this. It took an unexpected turn, but it wasn't unwelcome. Write more? :)
I thoroughly enjoyed this. It took an unexpected turn, but it wasn't unwelcome. Write more? :)
7/15/2015 c2 nine telled cherry blosom 28
awesome can u pease make more continue this story all the way to Naruto and Sakura getting married
awesome can u pease make more continue this story all the way to Naruto and Sakura getting married
12/1/2014 c1 MWHT13
Well Damn, that was intense. One of the most descriptive lemons/smut I have ever read; well done.
Well Damn, that was intense. One of the most descriptive lemons/smut I have ever read; well done.
10/11/2014 c2 
3Iron Monkey Fist
Ah, at least they have a heart to heart in the follow up chapter. Well done, enjoyable read.
3Iron Monkey FistAh, at least they have a heart to heart in the follow up chapter. Well done, enjoyable read.