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1/23/2009 c1 MShrieken
good start! Keep it goin, and this could turn into a good fic.
1/23/2009 c1 176Firehedgehog
hmm.. wonder what pushed him in
1/23/2009 c1 FluffyNevyn
this could be interesting...and yet at the same time...very, very scary. How tightly will this be crossed with Harry Potter is the biggest question on my mind. Ranma's new form would be magical, meaning he would attract official attention just by walking around...so the question becomes...how will he interact with the magical world. I would like these questions answered, so please, continue.
1/23/2009 c1 iceland
it is a good story to read and wonder what happens to ranma after he or she gets back to shore. does the guide tell him what spring that he fell in to is. how will the magic school contact ranma about being a veela.
1/23/2009 c1 7Teturo
So somebody besides the springs had it in for Ranma in this case. I can't wait to see who teleported him over the springs.

Genma as a panda girl very inventive. I can see the yen signs in Nabiki's eyes now.
1/23/2009 c1 13borg rabbit
how it had managed to built such a great reputation as a

'build'

Interesting start. Hope you continue.
1/23/2009 c1 40deathgeonous
Looking good. Thanks for writing this, bye for now.
1/23/2009 c1 notBald
Premise makes me think of Blond 1/2, which is not a bad thing at all. First chapter is well written, if a bit short.

Now does 'she' do that thing with her mouth ;)
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