for Roots8/24/2018 c1 Riddhi
This was so cute! I absolutely felt like Ren and Kyoko's characterizations we're on point! I really enjoyed your writing style too.
This was so cute! I absolutely felt like Ren and Kyoko's characterizations we're on point! I really enjoyed your writing style too.
9/14/2017 c1 A
Nice twist at the end. The rest of the story is good too.
Nice twist at the end. The rest of the story is good too.
8/16/2016 c1 Guest
I hope you finish your work one day I love it.
I hope you finish your work one day I love it.
7/12/2016 c1 AnonT
Must you torture people like this? TnT (so damn good!)
Must you torture people like this? TnT (so damn good!)
12/9/2013 c1 
56waiting4morning
I can't remember if I reviewed this before or not, but I found a link to this story in an old, old email and had to read it.
Lovely work characterizing Ren struggling with B.J./Cain. I have a hard time finding stories that stay in character for both Ren and Kyoko and you manage it beautifully. Well done!
56waiting4morningI can't remember if I reviewed this before or not, but I found a link to this story in an old, old email and had to read it.
Lovely work characterizing Ren struggling with B.J./Cain. I have a hard time finding stories that stay in character for both Ren and Kyoko and you manage it beautifully. Well done!
11/15/2013 c1 5Windying
ehehehehehe... omg... ren you in for a very much version night...hope you continue this for the next chapter or at least have a continue of this chapter...its very good...
5Windyingehehehehehe... omg... ren you in for a very much version night...hope you continue this for the next chapter or at least have a continue of this chapter...its very good...
10/24/2013 c1 1Yuu3
As expected, only Kyoko would suddenly make an unexpected comment. I dont know, although what you said about Ren was perfectly fine, reasonable, logical and seems to be like the character itself, I just can't match it with the original character. Im sorry, it just feels a little OOC. But nonetheless, I enjoyed reading it.
1Yuu3As expected, only Kyoko would suddenly make an unexpected comment. I dont know, although what you said about Ren was perfectly fine, reasonable, logical and seems to be like the character itself, I just can't match it with the original character. Im sorry, it just feels a little OOC. But nonetheless, I enjoyed reading it.