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9/9 c53 10Captured.By.Insanity
I would just like to say, I dont know if I've ever been as sad as I was finishing chapter 53 and realizing there was no more to the story and the likelihood of a n update slim. This is so good,I hope one day you finish it!
9/4 c44 9Ladylaurel
Got to say, Tseng thinking Cloud might be a better strategist than Sephiroth while looking at the result of Cloud being a complete space cadet was hilarious.

Seriously, Cloud couldn't be thinking of the consequences AT ALL when he decided to use previous battles - probably fort condor if I'm reading right - to entertain Sephiroth.

And then he's worried about explaining how he knows obscure fighting techniques later. I'm still snickering. Cloud, living up to his name, lol.
8/31 c5 Tin
More chap please, this story is great
8/25 c53 Guest
Great chapter and story. Please continue.
8/22 c6 Tin
More up please...
8/22 c5 Tin
Can't wait for update...
8/19 c53 6MM007
Very nice story, with an impressive amount of material and development. Cloud is even still a child, too! I'm also impressed to see an eleven year old story with regular updates.

I'm glad to see Vincent up early. He gives a resource that Shinra is unaware of - a Turk who can move freely. I wonder if he'll be used effectively...
8/16 c53 Erica Murray
I just came across your story and spent the past few days reading through it nonstop. And omg, I don’t think I’ve ever laughed so much when reading! You came up with a pretty cool twist to the original story bringing him back in time like this.

I think it’s beyond cool to think that all of Zacks suffering (along with many others) could be avoided and that there’s a possible chance at a friendship developing between Sephiroth and Cloud. I think you’ve captured the characters pretty true to how they would behave back during this time. We never really had that much insight of how the 3 firsts acted with one another outside of a few scenes in Crisis Core, but I would imagine since they were friends that they would have been pretty similar to what you thought up. Never mind people saying Zack acts too idiotic. He is super hyper and childish acting in Crisis Core pretty much until things with Angeal start falling apart. This last chapter with the 3 of them picking up Vincent had me totally dying! He’s a vampire! Ahhhh! LMAO! It’s a good thing you are cute Zack, hahaha!

I can’t wait until your next chapter. I know life is hectic and probably doesn’t leave you a lot of time to write, but we all appreciate what you have given us. Thanks for the entertainment!
8/13 c53 16Chmia
Thank you for writing. It us impressive you are keeping up with this story after all of these years. What dedication!
8/11 c5 Tin
Please please please update more...
8/10 c53 Analei
Oh my gosh! O.o I am so excited to find this being updated again! I literally shrieked in delight!

I cannot wait to see the Turks reactions to Vincent. Maybe even Sephiroth. Seriously, I really think those two could actually be related...

Anyway! Wonderful work with our adorable time traveler!
7/31 c53 Anwesha Baral
Please update fast
7/7 c53 Seaweed
Oh my goodness! Zack is so precious! I have not laughed this hard in a while! Really good chapter.
6/29 c32 3TheDisturbedDragon
...Oh boy, cloud messed up. Veld knew Vincent. Tseng has no doubt heard of his boss's partner. Though it does supply someone who could have taught him...
6/23 c53 3Greatazuredragon
Very nice story so far, good work.
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