for Odd Couple11/9/2010 c3 Eerie Iri
Poor Prowl.
I gotta say, if Bumblebee were my little brother/nephew/cousin/etc, I'd wash his mouth out with soap.
Poor Prowl.
I gotta say, if Bumblebee were my little brother/nephew/cousin/etc, I'd wash his mouth out with soap.
10/20/2010 c50 
68mmouse15
A nice wrap-up to the story. Sad, but as you say, necessary and far more true to real life than a fluffy ending.
I still grieve for what could have been, though.
68mmouse15A nice wrap-up to the story. Sad, but as you say, necessary and far more true to real life than a fluffy ending.
I still grieve for what could have been, though.
10/20/2010 c49 mmouse15
Yes, I read them all and came back to review.
Optimus and Sentinel remind me of two puppies fighting for dominance when the world is falling apart around them.
I'm glad Torque got a good-bye from LD, too.
Prowl's poor mom. I feel sorry for her, but it still makes me mad that she didn't protect her son better.
Yes, I read them all and came back to review.
Optimus and Sentinel remind me of two puppies fighting for dominance when the world is falling apart around them.
I'm glad Torque got a good-bye from LD, too.
Prowl's poor mom. I feel sorry for her, but it still makes me mad that she didn't protect her son better.
10/20/2010 c48 mmouse15
Oh, gods, the beginning of the end.
I had to brace myself to read these chapters - the notice came to my inbox, and I dreaded it and longed for it and it's taken me a few days to work up the courage to come and read.
Lockdown's good-bye to Prowl brought tears to my eyes. Everything he's ever wanted, and he has to let Prowl go.
Optimus was a nice touch.
Oh, gods, the beginning of the end.
I had to brace myself to read these chapters - the notice came to my inbox, and I dreaded it and longed for it and it's taken me a few days to work up the courage to come and read.
Lockdown's good-bye to Prowl brought tears to my eyes. Everything he's ever wanted, and he has to let Prowl go.
Optimus was a nice touch.
10/18/2010 c51 StarShineMB
While I wasn't expecting it to end this way, I'm still in awe of how amazing the whole story had been. Even with a sad ending, this will go down as one of my absolue favorites to read! Now I'm eagerly anticipating new chapters for the rest of your fics!
While I wasn't expecting it to end this way, I'm still in awe of how amazing the whole story had been. Even with a sad ending, this will go down as one of my absolue favorites to read! Now I'm eagerly anticipating new chapters for the rest of your fics!
10/17/2010 c51 11meteor prime
80 What a wonderful end.. I'm so glad theres sequel your writing is so beautiful. Its just so full of feeling- i was almost crying at some points. XD And you've caught the characters perfectly, bringing a tangible realism to them and their situatuions. its so sad that this fic had to come to an end but you know what they say about all good things...
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11meteor prime80 What a wonderful end.. I'm so glad theres sequel your writing is so beautiful. Its just so full of feeling- i was almost crying at some points. XD And you've caught the characters perfectly, bringing a tangible realism to them and their situatuions. its so sad that this fic had to come to an end but you know what they say about all good things...
M
10/16/2010 c51 2SNeptune21
That was amazing! You are, without a doubt, one of the best TFA Fanfic writers out there. Congratulations, you get some ice-cream for your efforts - D
*****/*****
SNeptune21
2SNeptune21That was amazing! You are, without a doubt, one of the best TFA Fanfic writers out there. Congratulations, you get some ice-cream for your efforts - D
*****/*****
SNeptune21
10/16/2010 c51 7Ember Koramin
Holy shit.
I just read this (in a week long span, unfortunately, due to obligations) and I finally finished it. And mostly what I can say is holy shit. You, madam, are an amazing writer, and this story is wonderful. It... didn't end like I thought it was going to. I sincerely believed they would have their nearly-fairy-tale ending, up until the last chapter. Seriously, I believed that strongly in the relationship and characterizations you had set up. I mean, I totally understand why you didn't make it that way, and this is cool too, and somehow very very appropriate (transition from young, unsure animated type Prowl to cool, collected G1ish type Prowl? I can see it.) Still, this story is just kinda...wow. I feel so sorry for Lockdown honestly. Everyone got a semi-happy ending except for him. What happened to him, in your head? Where did he end up, and is he at all happy? I am off to read the sequel-ish thing now. (Is it too much to hope for that you kill off Dai in a horrible, painful and utterly desereved way?)
7Ember KoraminHoly shit.
I just read this (in a week long span, unfortunately, due to obligations) and I finally finished it. And mostly what I can say is holy shit. You, madam, are an amazing writer, and this story is wonderful. It... didn't end like I thought it was going to. I sincerely believed they would have their nearly-fairy-tale ending, up until the last chapter. Seriously, I believed that strongly in the relationship and characterizations you had set up. I mean, I totally understand why you didn't make it that way, and this is cool too, and somehow very very appropriate (transition from young, unsure animated type Prowl to cool, collected G1ish type Prowl? I can see it.) Still, this story is just kinda...wow. I feel so sorry for Lockdown honestly. Everyone got a semi-happy ending except for him. What happened to him, in your head? Where did he end up, and is he at all happy? I am off to read the sequel-ish thing now. (Is it too much to hope for that you kill off Dai in a horrible, painful and utterly desereved way?)
10/15/2010 c51 Isola
I feel like I should comment here. I've been reading this fic for the past few days, and I must say, this is probably the best fanfiction I have ever read. This beats many of the novels I've read as well. Your characterization is amazing and you really make the reader feel for the characters. Even your sad parts are works of art. This story was simply wonderful and the pairing was quite unique. I must admit I was hoping that Lockdown would make it past his flaws, but the way you've ended this really keeps true to the characters themselves. This was the highlight of my day for the time I've been reading this and I hope you go on to write many more stories like this one.
I feel like I should comment here. I've been reading this fic for the past few days, and I must say, this is probably the best fanfiction I have ever read. This beats many of the novels I've read as well. Your characterization is amazing and you really make the reader feel for the characters. Even your sad parts are works of art. This story was simply wonderful and the pairing was quite unique. I must admit I was hoping that Lockdown would make it past his flaws, but the way you've ended this really keeps true to the characters themselves. This was the highlight of my day for the time I've been reading this and I hope you go on to write many more stories like this one.
10/14/2010 c51 PwnKage
I've finished reading this and D'AAAAWWWWW. I so sad. But I so happy too.
Is that even possible?
Anyways, I enjoyed every horrible cliffhanger, every moment filled with sexual tension and every moment that's made me roll around on the floor in anticipation, joy and pain.
I've often stopped reading some fanfictions after a while, but your story never seemed to bore me, every new chapter opened my eyes a little more, till I wondered why I even needed eyelids.
To me pairings don't matter a thing, especially when you're writing them. Once again, s-such a wonderful story. Also I SWEAR that Italian restaurant made an appearance before...
I'll be off reading Even Pair then 3.
I've finished reading this and D'AAAAWWWWW. I so sad. But I so happy too.
Is that even possible?
Anyways, I enjoyed every horrible cliffhanger, every moment filled with sexual tension and every moment that's made me roll around on the floor in anticipation, joy and pain.
I've often stopped reading some fanfictions after a while, but your story never seemed to bore me, every new chapter opened my eyes a little more, till I wondered why I even needed eyelids.
To me pairings don't matter a thing, especially when you're writing them. Once again, s-such a wonderful story. Also I SWEAR that Italian restaurant made an appearance before...
I'll be off reading Even Pair then 3.