for Edvy3/25/2014 c1 Heather
It's not even edvy so don't name it that your retarded
It's not even edvy so don't name it that your retarded
5/19/2012 c1 SilenceShouting
Honestly? I'm not afraid to die.
That was a marvelous chapter, and please update soon!
Honestly? I'm not afraid to die.
That was a marvelous chapter, and please update soon!
7/5/2011 c1 Marianne
When I Read This Story My Eyes Were Glued to the Screen! I Loved it Lots
When I Read This Story My Eyes Were Glued to the Screen! I Loved it Lots
8/22/2010 c1 FelixCraft
I really liked it, the part where Ed thought that Envy was going to rape him was priceless.
I would also have described a part where his limbs grew back (wasn't his left leg his outomail leg?).
I really liked it, the part where Ed thought that Envy was going to rape him was priceless.
I would also have described a part where his limbs grew back (wasn't his left leg his outomail leg?).
9/2/2009 c1 FlitterFlutter
Well, that was different. Thank you so much for making it different! Yays!
I think I may have caught...ONE punctuation error...there may have been a place that needed a comma, but didn't have one. But I don't remember where. Anywho, good writing.
You're very descriptive. In one or two places I think you may have been so descriptive it distracted my reading, but that's probably just me. Although I do hate it when people refer to eyes as "orbs". Thankfully you only did it once that I remember.
Anyway, good story, keep writing, Gosh I'm jealous!
Well, that was different. Thank you so much for making it different! Yays!
I think I may have caught...ONE punctuation error...there may have been a place that needed a comma, but didn't have one. But I don't remember where. Anywho, good writing.
You're very descriptive. In one or two places I think you may have been so descriptive it distracted my reading, but that's probably just me. Although I do hate it when people refer to eyes as "orbs". Thankfully you only did it once that I remember.
Anyway, good story, keep writing, Gosh I'm jealous!
6/16/2009 c1 Lorelei
This was so good. Whole idea is somenthing new and something that I have never read. Please keep writing stories like this.
This was so good. Whole idea is somenthing new and something that I have never read. Please keep writing stories like this.
4/11/2009 c1 
18Ophelia Davis
You've kept to the manga! I can tell.
this is quite a good chapter i must say. love it. you've read my story now i read yours. lol.
Very good use of words and grammar. you're a living theasarus. :D. keep on writing and reviewing.
18Ophelia DavisYou've kept to the manga! I can tell.
this is quite a good chapter i must say. love it. you've read my story now i read yours. lol.
Very good use of words and grammar. you're a living theasarus. :D. keep on writing and reviewing.