for Thoughts1/25/2015 c1 lemerly
Wow this was brilliant for something that only took you ten minutes to write good job :)
Wow this was brilliant for something that only took you ten minutes to write good job :)
9/3/2010 c1 okay
This one is less wangsty than the other one. However it's more like a description of his actions than an introspective into his thoughts. But you're only 15 after all
This one is less wangsty than the other one. However it's more like a description of his actions than an introspective into his thoughts. But you're only 15 after all
6/1/2009 c1 
11InuyashaWifey
It's good. So many people try to cover this topic. They all portray it with different ideas, but all of them are specail. Good job!
11InuyashaWifeyIt's good. So many people try to cover this topic. They all portray it with different ideas, but all of them are specail. Good job!
3/1/2009 c1 45Sassybratt
This was interesting. I've never read anything like this. Very original and great job on depicting his emotions. I liked it. ;b
45SassybrattThis was interesting. I've never read anything like this. Very original and great job on depicting his emotions. I liked it. ;b