for Tenkai E1/1/2016 c1 
2VampireAngel4Life
Well first of all I like the prologue cx as for how the story goes I would really like for Nataku to wake up by hearing Goku yelling or something XD and well at first be shocked to see Goku again and well for everyone to kind of remember tiny pieces of their memories while goku remembers a few from nataku. (if possible)
2VampireAngel4LifeWell first of all I like the prologue cx as for how the story goes I would really like for Nataku to wake up by hearing Goku yelling or something XD and well at first be shocked to see Goku again and well for everyone to kind of remember tiny pieces of their memories while goku remembers a few from nataku. (if possible)
4/10/2005 c1 kaori-chan
I wouldn't mind seeing nataku wire but you'll have to update someday ^^;
I wouldn't mind seeing nataku wire but you'll have to update someday ^^;
12/7/2004 c1 Ashura Akuma
Wooh... a trip to Tenkai E... this is interesting... Write more...
By the way, who taken care of Ririn? Sanzo sama? hahaha... since he is just shooting bullets here and there hehe...
Wooh... a trip to Tenkai E... this is interesting... Write more...
By the way, who taken care of Ririn? Sanzo sama? hahaha... since he is just shooting bullets here and there hehe...
7/22/2004 c1 ChikuSohma
I really DON'T know much on saiyuki ; aside from the first three manga, episode 16, 22, and 40. But I like whats doing on SOfar. It'd be great it Nataku woke up! But not just by Goku turning up. To easy. Which gets boring fast and also resorts in a fic being shorter that it could be. Wish I could help out a bit more with this for you but ^^; I'm clueless...for now. Keep up the good work I like the idea of the story alot. ~.^ good luck!
~Chiku
I really DON'T know much on saiyuki ; aside from the first three manga, episode 16, 22, and 40. But I like whats doing on SOfar. It'd be great it Nataku woke up! But not just by Goku turning up. To easy. Which gets boring fast and also resorts in a fic being shorter that it could be. Wish I could help out a bit more with this for you but ^^; I'm clueless...for now. Keep up the good work I like the idea of the story alot. ~.^ good luck!
~Chiku
12/10/2003 c1 9Misura
Definitely an interesting idea for a story ; it'll be nice to see them undertake this quest I think. Sorry for not being able to help you with that term for Nataku's position ; I don't know it either. Reading the story in first pov definitely makes it more interesting ; I hope you'll write more for it. :)
9MisuraDefinitely an interesting idea for a story ; it'll be nice to see them undertake this quest I think. Sorry for not being able to help you with that term for Nataku's position ; I don't know it either. Reading the story in first pov definitely makes it more interesting ; I hope you'll write more for it. :)
3/4/2003 c1 11Rayeth
I had the idea to do a ficcy like this one, imagine my surprise when I found out it already existed! Please continue! I'd been hoping for a fic like this for a very long time and then I decided to write my own but I found this! You MUST continue! Why is it only one short chapter? Ne, how are they gonna get to heaven anyways? My idea was that Gokuu could threaten a god or something.but of course, I'm overly dramatic.^^;. You really should write more and soon too! Y'know, I have yet to see a Nataku x Gokuu pairing. It would actually make more sense as they're closer in age. Maybe you could do that? Well, whatever you do, just update this soon!
11RayethI had the idea to do a ficcy like this one, imagine my surprise when I found out it already existed! Please continue! I'd been hoping for a fic like this for a very long time and then I decided to write my own but I found this! You MUST continue! Why is it only one short chapter? Ne, how are they gonna get to heaven anyways? My idea was that Gokuu could threaten a god or something.but of course, I'm overly dramatic.^^;. You really should write more and soon too! Y'know, I have yet to see a Nataku x Gokuu pairing. It would actually make more sense as they're closer in age. Maybe you could do that? Well, whatever you do, just update this soon!
10/28/2002 c1 412
WHAT HAPPENS NEXT? I NEED 2 KNOW! I would prefer it if Nataku woke up and got a bit weird.CON'T WRITING K'?
WHAT HAPPENS NEXT? I NEED 2 KNOW! I would prefer it if Nataku woke up and got a bit weird.CON'T WRITING K'?
9/30/2002 c1 Joan
so coooool!
continue! pls! make nataku wake up !i beg of you!
so coooool!
continue! pls! make nataku wake up !i beg of you!