for Shattered3/26/2009 c8 
6Holly360
hey
awesome chapter
please update soon i loved how you used rachel scott as insperation
6Holly360hey
awesome chapter
please update soon i loved how you used rachel scott as insperation
3/26/2009 c8 always.theheartbeat
That was an amazing essay. I don't even know her, but just hearing from you saying she was an amazing person and reading that essay made my eyes water.
But, not to sound rude, back to the chapter.
I really liked it, I think the essay added to its greatness. Oh I hope neither of them die... though that WOULD kinda mess up the fic. :) Well... happy writing, then. I'm sorry that Rachel died, and I'd like to say more, but I honestly don't know what else to say.
That was an amazing essay. I don't even know her, but just hearing from you saying she was an amazing person and reading that essay made my eyes water.
But, not to sound rude, back to the chapter.
I really liked it, I think the essay added to its greatness. Oh I hope neither of them die... though that WOULD kinda mess up the fic. :) Well... happy writing, then. I'm sorry that Rachel died, and I'd like to say more, but I honestly don't know what else to say.
3/26/2009 c7 always.theheartbeat
Woah! I literally gasped! And... AH! Lol, oh no! Oh does he shoot himself? Fake shot to freak them out? So many possibilities (wow no idea how to spell that) and only one answer. How clever of you to end it that way. :D
Woah! I literally gasped! And... AH! Lol, oh no! Oh does he shoot himself? Fake shot to freak them out? So many possibilities (wow no idea how to spell that) and only one answer. How clever of you to end it that way. :D
3/26/2009 c7 cool
oh my gosh i love this story its so good, your a great writer update soon i want to know what happens(:
oh my gosh i love this story its so good, your a great writer update soon i want to know what happens(:
3/25/2009 c7 edwardISmylovingvampire92
nice story. WHO DOES MARY SHOOT? I HOPE IT WAS KEVIN. but about domiquie?
nice story. WHO DOES MARY SHOOT? I HOPE IT WAS KEVIN. but about domiquie?
3/22/2009 c6 always.theheartbeat
Ah! Oh no! Drama! Lol. Can't wait for more!
And about the April thing, I think I can understand that cause we got the same thing but instead of a baby there's A TON of birthdays! Awh, but a baby! :D
Ah! Oh no! Drama! Lol. Can't wait for more!
And about the April thing, I think I can understand that cause we got the same thing but instead of a baby there's A TON of birthdays! Awh, but a baby! :D