for Shattered3/22/2009 c6 
3Lizardgirl7
:O AH! so SUSPENSFUL! Update as soon as u can, I will understand if it's not until after april, but please as soon as u can!
3Lizardgirl7:O AH! so SUSPENSFUL! Update as soon as u can, I will understand if it's not until after april, but please as soon as u can!
3/21/2009 c6 awilkins
oh my godish you have to update fast i want to know who the man is, is it kevin? this story is geting really good you have to update soon i want to know what gonna happen to mary, and your a great writer(:
oh my godish you have to update fast i want to know who the man is, is it kevin? this story is geting really good you have to update soon i want to know what gonna happen to mary, and your a great writer(:
3/19/2009 c5 25xRainyx
Idk- It feels like I'm missing a lot of emotion from Mary, and a lot of missing detail. Other then that, its okay. I'd like to see where this goes.
25xRainyxIdk- It feels like I'm missing a lot of emotion from Mary, and a lot of missing detail. Other then that, its okay. I'd like to see where this goes.
3/11/2009 c5 awilkins
i love this story, your a great writer. poor mary, kevin is so evil i hope this story has a happy ending. update soon i really love your story!
i love this story, your a great writer. poor mary, kevin is so evil i hope this story has a happy ending. update soon i really love your story!
3/6/2009 c5 invangel
Ah I hate this guy.He's a monster.Oh sorry.Monsters are more polite than Kevin.
Please continue.
Ah I hate this guy.He's a monster.Oh sorry.Monsters are more polite than Kevin.
Please continue.
3/5/2009 c5 always.theheartbeat
Oh, harsh Kevin! Well, whatelse can you expect, he's a maniac! Lol, no idea if I spelled that right! Anyway!
You updated! No way! (No offense of course) Wow that would be creepy if there was a screaming guy in the hospital...and then you almost got raped...BAD DAY THERE! Okay, I'm calm now.
Have fun writing!
Can't wait for more!
Oh, harsh Kevin! Well, whatelse can you expect, he's a maniac! Lol, no idea if I spelled that right! Anyway!
You updated! No way! (No offense of course) Wow that would be creepy if there was a screaming guy in the hospital...and then you almost got raped...BAD DAY THERE! Okay, I'm calm now.
Have fun writing!
Can't wait for more!
3/5/2009 c4 invangel
Ah.Your fanfic is excactly what i wanted and excpected for a fanfic after the movie.
Ah.Your fanfic is excactly what i wanted and excpected for a fanfic after the movie.