
11/14/2013 c11 Wisegirl1480
This is a really good story. I was smiling uncontrollably at some parts :-)
This is a really good story. I was smiling uncontrollably at some parts :-)
10/20/2013 c10 Guest
LOVE IT !
LOVE IT !
10/20/2013 c2 Guest
It was great :))))) thank You... Say hi to the fuzzy You jajajaja
It was great :))))) thank You... Say hi to the fuzzy You jajajaja
4/1/2013 c10 Guest
This was an amazing story
This was an amazing story
12/9/2011 c10
9Charmed Dark Alias
Wow that was just amazing, you have done really well. Joey's mum has always been a bit of a Dominque liking idiot. It was a really great way to end a really great story.

Wow that was just amazing, you have done really well. Joey's mum has always been a bit of a Dominque liking idiot. It was a really great way to end a really great story.
3/26/2011 c11 Emma
I love the story it is amazing. I loved how u ended it. 1000 thumbs up:)
I love the story it is amazing. I loved how u ended it. 1000 thumbs up:)
8/29/2010 c6 1234
No offense but so far this is really predectible because I knew it was the mom who called. It was a given and Natalia was no suprise at all because before I read that part I thought she would have been invited.
No offense but so far this is really predectible because I knew it was the mom who called. It was a given and Natalia was no suprise at all because before I read that part I thought she would have been invited.
8/21/2010 c1 Damon Heart
Very nice great description and great seanery I felt like I was there I loved how u played out the proposal it was very realistic. Great job
-Damon Heart @-
Very nice great description and great seanery I felt like I was there I loved how u played out the proposal it was very realistic. Great job
-Damon Heart @-
6/29/2010 c10
294Gabriella Somerfield
I loved this chapter espically this part
"TAMI!" I shouted angrily, standing up quickly and knocking Joey to his back.
"Mary?" came from a happily confused, now de-bagged Joey.
"Mary?" Tami calmly retorted.
"Tami?" Joey asked questioningly.
"Joey!" I pointed angrily at Joey, giving Tami an icy glare.
"Mary," Tami began but was cut off quickly.
"DUSTIN!" Dustin happily announced, wanting to join in on the fun.
"Dustin." Tami and I said warningly.

I loved this chapter espically this part
"TAMI!" I shouted angrily, standing up quickly and knocking Joey to his back.
"Mary?" came from a happily confused, now de-bagged Joey.
"Mary?" Tami calmly retorted.
"Tami?" Joey asked questioningly.
"Joey!" I pointed angrily at Joey, giving Tami an icy glare.
"Mary," Tami began but was cut off quickly.
"DUSTIN!" Dustin happily announced, wanting to join in on the fun.
"Dustin." Tami and I said warningly.