
12/19/2013 c1 L
DUDE THIS IS PRETTY GOOD. MAKE NEW CHAPTERS!
DUDE THIS IS PRETTY GOOD. MAKE NEW CHAPTERS!
4/27/2009 c1
6Kaiser dude
An interesting start... You've definitely caught my attention with this story. Let's see what happens next. I'm not too familiar with Death Note, but I've heard about it from my friends in school. Good beginning though

An interesting start... You've definitely caught my attention with this story. Let's see what happens next. I'm not too familiar with Death Note, but I've heard about it from my friends in school. Good beginning though