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2/13/2009 c3 Raziel Severing
... wow, that was a tear jerker. you know you could make another spinoff using kalen. this storie tied up so many loose ends like Iakka and dylan. exscuse me if i misspelled any names. oh also you merged alot of words.. alot. you might want to look into that
2/6/2009 c2 Raziel Severing
... hmm i say it could have been longer. jkjk lol. definently one of your best work. not better than Vanquished. but second best... okay to be technical its the best ON this site, i hope others read this.
2/3/2009 c1 Raziel Severing
pretty good so far. wasnt expecting it to be that long, could be broken into two chapters. some parts were confusing, but thats easly fixed by me rereading it. cant wait for the next bit ^^

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