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4/8/2020 c37 2Queen of Doom and Despair
thank you for this story! it's one of those pieces that keeps you up at night reading chapter after chapter.
you stayed so true to the character's personalities, and the releanships reflected that.
3/14/2015 c37 10suicune4ever
That was a wonderful story! Great job :)

My only problem with it, is that although we got lots of scenes in which Elphie and Glinda make-up, we haven't really heard a proper apology from Fiyero yet - after all, he did pretend to be her boyfriend.

I felt like Glinda at least deserved that.

Other than that, great job :D
3/14/2015 c32 Guest
I'm surprised and slightly sad that Fiyero hasn't talked to Glinda yet.
Sure, Elphaba's her best friend, but Fiyero was her boyfriend - even if he was only pretending. She deserves at least an apology from him.
12/5/2014 c15 21I'mWickedThroughAndThrough
Whoa. First time anyone's ever come up with the wizard having a spell that was torn from the grimmerie... i like it. Kudos to you for thinking that up! Ozsome!
10/3/2013 c2 3Fae Tiggular
Omo y'all, I mean I love the Fiyeraba but Yero should've broken up with Glin by now.
And I've got a feeling that special something is gonna go wrong in the EC like always. Or this can just be nice and no WWOTW proclamations
10/3/2013 c1 Fae Tiggular
Omo omo awesome! Aww yeah, Fiyeraba time y'all. Elphie will realize it's ok later.
6/27/2013 c10 Lexie
Brilliant xxx
6/27/2013 c7 Lexie
:'( poor Elphaba, that might have been difficult
Well written :) xx
6/27/2013 c6 Lexie
Awwwww 3
6/27/2013 c5 Lexie
I was secretly hoping for a mini Fiyero but oh well... :P ;)
6/27/2013 c1 Lexie
Although he's cheating on Galinda and that's wrong and everything,
THAT WAS THE CUTEST FLUFF EVER OMO 3
6/24/2013 c37 61musicgal3
For Chapter 35, since I'd already reviewed: Haha, glad everything turned out alright for the Fiyero and his family and the Vinkus in general! Yay!

I love Glinda sniffling along at the beautiful scene. That's just gorgeous. It's almost as if there never was a huge quarrel!

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For the ending: *squeals* AWWWWWWWWWWWWW! Love love love love LOVE! So sad it's over, but a perfect ending. As I've said before, this is how Wicked SHOULD have gone! It's a perfect mix of the book and the musical, and I really A-D-O-R-E it!

Favourite lines from this chapter:

"Glinda's put her best team on it and told them if things don't go smoothly, she's going to let Madame Morrible out of Southstairs. I think that did the trick."

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'"She'll miss it if she doesn't wake up." Liir's parents laughed at his concern.'

You've heard it all before...but Liir is just TOOOO adorable!

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'As if on cue Glinda entered, flanked by Fiyero's brother who had taken quite a shine to the blonde, "There you are! Sorry Elphie, he ran away when I turned my back."

"Glinda, you've been running around all day. Relax! Let Perix do some of the chasing, he's clearly very good at it." Elphaba sniggered as Fiyero teased his brother, watching his cheeks redden with embarrassment'

What a surprise! heheh I totally sniggered at that remark, too! Brilliant!

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"We have two beautiful, healthy children, wonderful friends, a roof over our heads, and neither of us are made of straw. We can do anything!"

LOL! I can totally hear him say that, and it's just so Fiyero!

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All in all, I totally love this story, and though I'm sad to see it come to a close, it is the perfect ending. I enjoyed reading it very much - thankyou for taking us on this wonderful adventure! Any chance of a sequel? ;)

Okay, I'm pushing my luck, aren't I? But I just L-O-V-E this story! Thankyou for sharing! xxxx
6/24/2013 c34 musicgal3
Funny story, eh? What's the bet Elphaba won't be amused? lol

Another very emotional chapter! And our beautiful family is back together again! Yays!

Liir is just toooooooo adorable! (I've a feeling that's at least the third time I've said that now. Must be some truth to it!)

Favourite lines:

'He was going to feel some of her pain, whether he liked it or not.'

I love how, no matter how unfocused she is on everything else at that moment, Elphaba can still manage to have a slightly spiteful moment!
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"You take over."

Said so casually, as if she were driving a car. Love it; made me giggle.
6/24/2013 c33 musicgal3
I was crying right throughout this chapter, and then they just poured out at that last line. I love how you wrote Elphaba's frantic pleas and Glinda trying to calm her and talk some sense into her. It was beautiful and heart-breaking and now I must read on!
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