
11/2/2012 c11
57Brenna's Urbangirl Projects
Well you were still writing as of a half a year ago. Still its a shame this story hasn't been updated in 3 years. Would have loved to read more.

Well you were still writing as of a half a year ago. Still its a shame this story hasn't been updated in 3 years. Would have loved to read more.
3/30/2012 c11
61Nimbus Llewelyn
Okay, this is good, very good. But it seems a little contrived, and a little... compact. Still excellent and worth updating.

Okay, this is good, very good. But it seems a little contrived, and a little... compact. Still excellent and worth updating.
2/12/2012 c2 Evangelynn
Okay I like how you portray Buffy, James, and Lily but I am really starting to hate Willow! Willow and her childhood friend who is supposed to still be Willow's best friend escape her (Buffy) kidnappers and now willow is doing everything in her power to help Buffy's kidnapper to find and recapture Buffy. Does Willow have Shockhomes(?) Syndrome?
Okay I like how you portray Buffy, James, and Lily but I am really starting to hate Willow! Willow and her childhood friend who is supposed to still be Willow's best friend escape her (Buffy) kidnappers and now willow is doing everything in her power to help Buffy's kidnapper to find and recapture Buffy. Does Willow have Shockhomes(?) Syndrome?
12/29/2009 c11
4verynearlysouffled
This is a great story! Wonderful idea and I'm hooked! Can you post more soon cos this is awesome! Your editing skills are really well done, your plot is fabulous and your writing style is very well done.

This is a great story! Wonderful idea and I'm hooked! Can you post more soon cos this is awesome! Your editing skills are really well done, your plot is fabulous and your writing style is very well done.
12/24/2009 c11 blue talith
Gibby's a very good writer and this chapter is welcomed! I do hope that gibby101 does find the time to finish this tale up!
Gibby's a very good writer and this chapter is welcomed! I do hope that gibby101 does find the time to finish this tale up!
10/16/2009 c11 Legolas' Girl 31
Awesome chapter, I can't wait until you update next. Please, please, please, please, please update soon. Please?
Dani
Awesome chapter, I can't wait until you update next. Please, please, please, please, please update soon. Please?
Dani
10/15/2009 c11
14bethchilds34
freekishly short but good. still going strong! r u going to update b4 winter break? jk i know u will... i'll force u... hahahaahha

freekishly short but good. still going strong! r u going to update b4 winter break? jk i know u will... i'll force u... hahahaahha
10/5/2009 c10 bethchilds34
hey dude have i mentioned b4 that i luv this story? well, if i havent, i LUV THIS STORY! u totally need to start it up again! get back to me!
hey dude have i mentioned b4 that i luv this story? well, if i havent, i LUV THIS STORY! u totally need to start it up again! get back to me!
10/5/2009 c9 bethchilds34
hey 2 things! 1 this story is AMAZING! i never even read or saw the Buffy th Vamipre Slayer movies/books and i luv this! 2: the Maria and Irene u talk about at the end of ch. 9, r they the 1s that stayed with us? there were like 3 marias and 3 irenes so i was just wondering...
hey 2 things! 1 this story is AMAZING! i never even read or saw the Buffy th Vamipre Slayer movies/books and i luv this! 2: the Maria and Irene u talk about at the end of ch. 9, r they the 1s that stayed with us? there were like 3 marias and 3 irenes so i was just wondering...