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2/7/2009 c1 16Laine3112
Great start Pam. Very descriptive and just the right blend of angst and intrigue. Will look forward to your next chapter. Well done, L
2/7/2009 c1 TheNaggingCube
your summary leaves me worried. this chapter leaves me wanting more now!
2/7/2009 c1 Gloworm41
Great start to this story I can't wait to read the next chapter!
2/7/2009 c1 16alli1
What an intriguing beginning. I'm dying to find out what Tony was up to, and who he was working for. I have a feeling he's in for a hard time from Gibbs for this one, unless he's got a really good excuse. Can't wait for more!
2/7/2009 c1 kelam-2002
I'm waiting with bated breath. I hope RL gets out of the way so you can continue.
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