
5/2/2024 c15 paulieandgilbert
Not to be a 'Debby doubter' here, but if I'm right this is a time scale of what, two days? This seems awfully fast to me.
Not to be a 'Debby doubter' here, but if I'm right this is a time scale of what, two days? This seems awfully fast to me.
2/4/2023 c88
10JJ Twi1ight
Good job and completing your first story! That is quite an accomplishment and I see that you have written several more. As for this story, Jacob and Bella are so sweet and adorable. I love how you wrote Charlie and Billy. I like Bella and Angela's friendship. I feel like the plot of the story got lost in lemons. I know they are important to the relationship, which is a major plot point. You had some great ideas like Bella's blood being powerful that got lost. I am curious about the sequel. As I said, Jacob and Bella are so sweet. It takes new back to writing my story Bella's Sun.

Good job and completing your first story! That is quite an accomplishment and I see that you have written several more. As for this story, Jacob and Bella are so sweet and adorable. I love how you wrote Charlie and Billy. I like Bella and Angela's friendship. I feel like the plot of the story got lost in lemons. I know they are important to the relationship, which is a major plot point. You had some great ideas like Bella's blood being powerful that got lost. I am curious about the sequel. As I said, Jacob and Bella are so sweet. It takes new back to writing my story Bella's Sun.
2/3/2023 c76 JJ Twi1ight
I like that this chapter was slower and we got to visualize the wedding. I feel like once you knew there would be a sequel then this story became very rushed. Interested too see what happens next.
I like that this chapter was slower and we got to visualize the wedding. I feel like once you knew there would be a sequel then this story became very rushed. Interested too see what happens next.
2/3/2023 c51 JJ Twi1ight
Jacob and Bella are so sweet. I tend to skip lemons so I've been flying through the past few chapters.
Jacob and Bella are so sweet. I tend to skip lemons so I've been flying through the past few chapters.
2/2/2023 c36 JJ Twi1ight
Embry and Angela are adorable, however I find it strange that no one seems to remember she is a ministers daughter and that she works want to be married first.
Embry and Angela are adorable, however I find it strange that no one seems to remember she is a ministers daughter and that she works want to be married first.
2/1/2023 c23 JJ Twi1ight
Bella's blood bring special is unique and I like it. I don't understand the late imprinting. It doesn't make sense, but maybe it will be explained later.
Bella's blood bring special is unique and I like it. I don't understand the late imprinting. It doesn't make sense, but maybe it will be explained later.
2/1/2023 c15 JJ Twi1ight
Your chapters are sweet and I like that they are short. However, it is hard to remember that Jacob and Bella have reconnected only two days ago. They are moving fast.
Your chapters are sweet and I like that they are short. However, it is hard to remember that Jacob and Bella have reconnected only two days ago. They are moving fast.