for Dirty Little Secrets5/2/2009 c17 Joelyn
K i just finished reading the whole of your story and wanted to comment :
I) The Plot was Good and "colourful"
II) The Storyline was exciting and anticipating (it kept me at the edge of my seat)
I) The overall : 8*/10* Rating (Good Job! ^^)
IV) The character of Caleb in your story (no offense) in my opinion felt abit of an annoying brat. (It's not a big issue...just voicing out my comment.
Well I think that i've finished commenting on your story. Can't wait to read D.L.S. 2 ^^ mainly coz my fav cov boy is "Baby Boy" hehe my lil Ty Boy
K i just finished reading the whole of your story and wanted to comment :
I) The Plot was Good and "colourful"
II) The Storyline was exciting and anticipating (it kept me at the edge of my seat)
I) The overall : 8*/10* Rating (Good Job! ^^)
IV) The character of Caleb in your story (no offense) in my opinion felt abit of an annoying brat. (It's not a big issue...just voicing out my comment.
Well I think that i've finished commenting on your story. Can't wait to read D.L.S. 2 ^^ mainly coz my fav cov boy is "Baby Boy" hehe my lil Ty Boy
3/18/2009 c17 
3baileenicolee13
ok seriously. i loved your story. it was amazing! i loved how reid and tyler had a thing for her but in the end ty gave her up cause he knew how reid truly felt about her. :) so sweet. hmm i really like u as an author if you could send me a small description of what you look like i'll add you into my newest story. thanks!
3baileenicolee13ok seriously. i loved your story. it was amazing! i loved how reid and tyler had a thing for her but in the end ty gave her up cause he knew how reid truly felt about her. :) so sweet. hmm i really like u as an author if you could send me a small description of what you look like i'll add you into my newest story. thanks!
3/17/2009 c16 alchemistic
aw its over? i usually end my story with deaths or insanity cuz happy ending usually come out TERRIBLE but yours was good.
A sequel focused on Tyler wwouuld be absolutely great! I'm alreeady excited and can't wait to read it!
-Aerona
aw its over? i usually end my story with deaths or insanity cuz happy ending usually come out TERRIBLE but yours was good.
A sequel focused on Tyler wwouuld be absolutely great! I'm alreeady excited and can't wait to read it!
-Aerona
3/16/2009 c16 1hockeygrl125
that was so sweet. i am so glad she surivied.. that would be killer, if she died. anyways it was a great story!
1hockeygrl125that was so sweet. i am so glad she surivied.. that would be killer, if she died. anyways it was a great story!
3/15/2009 c15 2travelchica
Poor Lynn and poor Reid.
Fantastic chapter. Nice to see Chase back in the flesh, but what a trickster he is.
I felt terrible for Caleb with the whole sarah thing.
Can't wait for me
TC
2travelchicaPoor Lynn and poor Reid.
Fantastic chapter. Nice to see Chase back in the flesh, but what a trickster he is.
I felt terrible for Caleb with the whole sarah thing.
Can't wait for me
TC
3/14/2009 c15 JClayton
Wow that was such a great twist I kinda don't care that you were mean with the cliffhanger
LOVEd the willing thing, such a great bad guy move
AND I'm glad he didn't monologue, just taunting the monoluging
thing bugs me but youd din't which is good.
Wow that was such a great twist I kinda don't care that you were mean with the cliffhanger
LOVEd the willing thing, such a great bad guy move
AND I'm glad he didn't monologue, just taunting the monoluging
thing bugs me but youd din't which is good.