
5/7/2012 c2 ss11bb
Try writing more to this story. You never had a true lemon in there. You had a lemony substance, but not a big, juicy lemon. Please try. I love your writing style. Most of the lemons I've read always have so many mistakes, its so distracting. You rarely have any. If you don't end up with the story, at least kep writing 'cause your awesome
Try writing more to this story. You never had a true lemon in there. You had a lemony substance, but not a big, juicy lemon. Please try. I love your writing style. Most of the lemons I've read always have so many mistakes, its so distracting. You rarely have any. If you don't end up with the story, at least kep writing 'cause your awesome
7/30/2011 c2
2DropDeadMyDear
Wahhhh, this is soo KINKY I LOVE IT! hehhee, should have seen me. Giggling and squealing like a little girl _ But its just soo Awesome. ^^

Wahhhh, this is soo KINKY I LOVE IT! hehhee, should have seen me. Giggling and squealing like a little girl _ But its just soo Awesome. ^^
5/11/2011 c2
8RachelWrites51
OK so not only to I think that this story is BRILLIANT. but I laughed at almost every line! great job! Love it!

OK so not only to I think that this story is BRILLIANT. but I laughed at almost every line! great job! Love it!
1/16/2011 c2
6VampireBassist
I'd totally love to read a sequel of how Ikuto and Tadase share Amu. Great story. ;3

I'd totally love to read a sequel of how Ikuto and Tadase share Amu. Great story. ;3
1/10/2011 c2 your well-learned politesse
OH. MY. GOD. hottest thing i have ever read on fanfic eyvarrrrrr!
OH. MY. GOD. hottest thing i have ever read on fanfic eyvarrrrrr!
12/11/2010 c2
5Writing4funn2009
Hey I love this story! Could u tell me if anyone wants to continue the story ? Ethier way I'd love to read the continuations of this story and I'd like to continue it too.
Sorry I didn't PM u cuz I wanted to say great work on the whole story. The foreplay is awesome. Lol even though it isn't really foreplay, it's seems smexy!

Hey I love this story! Could u tell me if anyone wants to continue the story ? Ethier way I'd love to read the continuations of this story and I'd like to continue it too.
Sorry I didn't PM u cuz I wanted to say great work on the whole story. The foreplay is awesome. Lol even though it isn't really foreplay, it's seems smexy!