for Stolen Life2/9/2015 c1 Ryan
Very nice. I'm caught already.
Very nice. I'm caught already.
2/9/2009 c1 
1The Amazing Chicken Dinner
I... Cannot describe how heart-felt this must have been. I really liked it. Wonderful. Nothing I can say. I'm just so... Well.. Inspired!
1The Amazing Chicken DinnerI... Cannot describe how heart-felt this must have been. I really liked it. Wonderful. Nothing I can say. I'm just so... Well.. Inspired!
2/9/2009 c1 25cheezburgerlover
Yes yes yes! Oh, I didn't inspire this in any way, did I? This story sounds lots like mine... But oh well. I love the emotions here, though. Great work. :)
The lover of cheezburgers,
cheezburgerlover. :)
25cheezburgerloverYes yes yes! Oh, I didn't inspire this in any way, did I? This story sounds lots like mine... But oh well. I love the emotions here, though. Great work. :)
The lover of cheezburgers,
cheezburgerlover. :)
2/9/2009 c1 X6Herbius
That was, to say the least, interesting... :) Your writing is very good at conveying the emotion from the woman and made an intruiging short story. I can imagine a sizeable amount of citizens reacting in ways similar to this because of Combine opression; shame she didn't do something more with the rest of her life, instead of running straight into a load of CPs. Well, that's what writers tent to make happen. :P
That was, to say the least, interesting... :) Your writing is very good at conveying the emotion from the woman and made an intruiging short story. I can imagine a sizeable amount of citizens reacting in ways similar to this because of Combine opression; shame she didn't do something more with the rest of her life, instead of running straight into a load of CPs. Well, that's what writers tent to make happen. :P