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3/27/2017 c1 Mr guy
0/10 delete yourself.
12/29/2011 c6 Invader Viceroy
not bad
9/6/2010 c6 4Fallen-Ryu
dude, this is very intresting! i cant wait to see how this series will eventually tie into starcraft 2, if it does...but still it would be awsome in the ian crystal where the protoss, jedi, yuajti, and eldar fight together against the hybrids...one hell of a fight!...also hilarity to ensure when they all come together for a freindly reuonin!
3/16/2009 c2 1SonoftheBlast
i personally thought that over all the story was WAY TO SHORT!

And please could you be at least a little more original SERIOUSLY no offense

but couldn't come up with some other way to end the story.

The writing was good though i give story 7.9/10
3/8/2009 c6 4Shade the Bat
I can only guess what happened when G-man comes.
3/8/2009 c6 Jjvalour
G-Man?
3/4/2009 c1 1HAL-9001
Alright! I've been impressed by your other works, and I have high hopes for this one, too. Although I know next to nothing of Warhammer 40K.
3/3/2009 c5 Inactive - please delete this
i found this chapter really funny... :p

on the good side of course

i liked the way you put in the "horror" scenes of Zeratul's life.. :)
3/2/2009 c5 hedatary
my man..my man! keep it up! been a fan since you're first stories of this character. Hope i don't miss it if you ever do quit
3/2/2009 c5 4Shade the Bat
Sweet.
3/1/2009 c4 Shade the Bat
uploaded an intro? thats whats new.
2/17/2009 c3 Inactive - please delete this
this is for chapter 2 and 3.

The flow was good; I really do wonder how you manage to extract a whole chapter out of a few scenes (I never quite mastered that... :p)

Aside from minor typos, i didn't see any MAJOR error. I enjoyed reading it (though i am simply NOT a dark templar fan :p)

anyhow, good job!

-Shaiera
2/16/2009 c3 Shade the Bat
Wish "I" was in that position! lol
2/15/2009 c3 Jjvalour
Nice so far.

For some other fight scenes let me see if I can give you a little inspiration.

youtube . com / watch?v=M-vbWJd2o_0

youtube . com / watch?v=OaHSIPYN45E&feature=related
2/13/2009 c2 Shade the Bat
CANT WAIT!
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