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4/3/2009 c12 41We Can Be Gorgeous
I really like this odd pairing. Who knew Pete and Sonny were, ahem, 'brothers!' ;-)

Looking out for more of this! (I'm new to In the Heights!)

~Marky~
3/30/2009 c12 12SiriusLovesRent
I MISSED YOU AND YOUR UPDATES! Oh my god, the way you described how Sonny was dressed was like ADORABLE. I must see him dressed like this. HE WAS BLUSHING! As if the outfit wasn't enough. And the gay prom! That's magical. I bet they had a great time. Being all sweet and in love and stuff. LOOKIN ALL DAPPER.

And USNAVI! I think the ones with him are my favorite. Just because I love seeing his reactions to Sonny and Pete. I love that he's surprised at what Sonny's wearing, because yeah, he wouldn't wear something like that unless he was doing something special. And I love his "Have fun and be careful". I don't even know why.

This one was so good, and I hope you don't mind my obscenely long review :P And I just prompted you, so I don't think I need to again, but if you want any, just tell me(:
3/30/2009 c12 itsdelovely
I'M SO HAPPY YOU UPDATED! dont leave me without updates for that long again! ;) lol just kidding. it's ok. i just missed these. yay for this one having usnavi! i love when he's in these, him with sonny is too great.

now i'm going to go and sit and picture sonny and pete at a gay prom and being happy and cute. you should write one with what they did there!

update soon!
3/30/2009 c12 8lesblams
That is just...so sweet. I love this chapter. I love the whole story, really, and I'm sorry I haven't gotten to review before (last time I tried the box wouldn't work for me, no lie). I'm constantly awaiting your next chapter.

I don't really have any prompts, but I would like to see more dialogue in the story. Most of the chapters are point of views or speculation instead of interaction, which isn't bad, but it's nice to shake things up and show both sides of the relationship. This chapter was really good with that.

-Apolianne
3/29/2009 c11 1PhantomSpinach
(your asking for reveiws at the end of this chapter (ch. 11) is soo funny! teehee

So what's the solution? Oh, in response to my other response...(I forgot which chapter), can I make the "prompt" request that of which I asked earlier? "gay and response" ...yeah. ^^;;

That is if you're still taking prompts and that you want to continue the ficcage. ...if not, this has been very fun and enjoyable and good luck on all future endeavors!

~~RGM (not General Motors, Inc)
3/29/2009 c6 PhantomSpinach
Ya know, after reading mostly really long fics, I'm likin' this short chapter thing. Like, loving, actually.

I'm also thoroughly enjoying the plot line and the characterization. Now the cliffhanger! oh, gosh, what could he have heard? The dreaded three letter "f" word? Or the over used three letter "g" word? (which personally I hate hearing in natural conversation, ...rather irksome, actally) Oh, the suspense!

^^ Looking forward to the next chapters!

~~RGM (not General Motors, Inc)

PS-if your looking for "a well rounded critique," the only thing I can think of is maybe seperate your author's notes more ...but for short fics I think your way's works well. ~RGM
3/29/2009 c1 PhantomSpinach
(I hope you don't mind the language, but) OMG! I totally thought I was the only one who thought these guys were TOTALLY SLASHABLE! ^^ I'm so happy right now! Thanks for posting and I look forward to more of your mussings!

Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you. ! XD

~~RGM (not General Motors, Inc.)
3/18/2009 c11 itsdelovely
OMG I THOUGHT YOU DIED OR SOMETHING. ok, not REALLY, but i was still afraid you had abandoned this story or something. well, i hope your show's going well =D

so on to the review! aww, i wish sonny and pete could go to prom together *pout* and if anyone had anything to say about it, i would kick them. but anyway, are you gonna contine this one? because i'd love to see what sonny's solution is!

i'm so glad you're back to updating, i missed these a lot. ok, great one, very cute idea! update soon!
3/17/2009 c11 12SiriusLovesRent
JUSTFORTHERECORD Sonny and Pete at prom would be absolutely adorable. The picture of them dancing, all dressed up and stuff is absolutely adorable. And Usnavi's the mom that takes all the pictures for the MEMORIES.

Hehehe(:

YAY I'M GLAD YOU UPDATED. Your updates make me smile(:
3/10/2009 c10 thymer
These are fabulous! Great work. I really like the one about Usnavi already having figured it out, but not knowing how to say it.
3/8/2009 c10 itsdelovely
omgomgomg WOO! i love what you did with this one =D i like the combining of the two prompts, it really worked. lololol my mind immediately strayed to the more dirty things XD but you know. oh but yes, that was so good.

mind if i prompt you again? i hope not because i have: dark and lonely.

yay for sonny/pete! every time you update this, i do a little dance in my seat. they make me so happy :)
3/7/2009 c10 SiriusLovesRent
OH, YOU'VE DONE IT AGAIN.

And I love this one, if only for the strange image that came to my mind: Usnavi, Vanessa and her friend (who resembles Krysta Rodriguez) are standing in the bodega, while Vanessa and Krysta-friend do their whole crisis thang, and Usnavi's standing there like, miming out all these scenarios which involve him dying in some way.

AND THEN stumbling on WHAT? Graffiti Pete and Sonny doing THINGS on the couch? That's just brilliant. I love it, picturing Usnavi getting all nervous and flustered and surprised and Pete and Sonny, like, SHIELDING themselves.

Oh what a good one this was(: Update soon. I kind of live for these. As sad as that is.
3/4/2009 c9 SiriusLovesRent
O: Sorry this is so late! The site wasn't letting me log in for some reason.

ANYWAYANYWAYANEEWAI. Oh, this was an EXCELLENT one(: And I'm glad someone gave you love, because I was thinking about doing it soon xD But yeah, I love it. This line, so perfect: "There is no way that he could be paralyzed by his fear when Sonny makes him feel like *this*." And I think it's totally right that Pete's scared of what people will say, but how Sonny kind of makes that all fade away from him, if only for a bit.

I think I may be in love with them being in love. And that was just about the cheesiest thing I've ever said, but it's THE TRUTH. And I think that it's necessary that more people start getting into ITH fanfic and Pete/Sonny, because these are so good, and you deserve a hundred good reviews.

ramble ramble ramble. Okay. THE END.
3/4/2009 c9 itsdelovely
yayayayayay! you did my prompt!

and you did it so CUTE, omg. greatgreatgreatgreat job on it, i absolutely love it.

i don't even know what to say! just update soon, these are so good :) and lol, mahmayn cole porter.
2/28/2009 c8 itsdelovely
yay! i'm so happy i just found this story, it's so good omg. i just recently got into in the heights, and when i finally saw it, i was like 'man. i think i just started slashing ANOTHER musical.' and i totally thought i was the only one :)

here's two prompts for you: love and 2am

can't wait to see what you do with them! and update soon! i'm so excited for the next chapter, and can't wait to see what you do with these prompts.
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