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9/14/2012 c1 7Kingdom Hearts Slayer
nice keep going its good
6/24/2011 c1 25Lyall the Werewolf
This is actually the first review I ever did. But, enough about me, let's talk about the story. I wanna the second chapter real bad! Plus, a female Roxas sounds interesting.

5/31/2011 c1 4TwilightSky15
this is cool you should continue! ^_^
5/6/2011 c1 hellanime
this is ok i would like to see more so right now the rating is 2.6 out of 5
5/2/2011 c1 Tsyne-Echo-Oblivion
this is pretty damn good...keep it up! :3
6/17/2010 c1 Detective KJ
I like it! I hope you continue soon! ^_^

5/9/2009 c1 Phoenix80hp
O! Fatal Frame! I've only played the second one...and it freaked me out! But anyways great start! I can't wait for the next chapter!
4/8/2009 c1 44the bird of the chapel
Writing a horror is tough, but I suggest you work more on the narration and description. Though it may seem boring, if you pull the right words together, it'd end up right!

I never played the game, but I've certainly wikipediad it XD
2/12/2009 c1 Gem
Cliff hangers? I need to know what happens! Please Update soon. But this is is really intresting. Hope you won't stop!
2/12/2009 c1 5Zacheria
this is Awsome! please continue!

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