for Fatal Hearts6/24/2011 c1 
24Lyall the Werewolf
This is actually the first review I ever did. But, enough about me, let's talk about the story. I wanna the second chapter real bad! Plus, a female Roxas sounds interesting.
PLEASE HURRY!
24Lyall the WerewolfThis is actually the first review I ever did. But, enough about me, let's talk about the story. I wanna the second chapter real bad! Plus, a female Roxas sounds interesting.
PLEASE HURRY!
5/9/2009 c1 Phoenix80hp
O! Fatal Frame! I've only played the second one...and it freaked me out! But anyways great start! I can't wait for the next chapter!
O! Fatal Frame! I've only played the second one...and it freaked me out! But anyways great start! I can't wait for the next chapter!
4/8/2009 c1 43the bird of the chapel
Writing a horror is tough, but I suggest you work more on the narration and description. Though it may seem boring, if you pull the right words together, it'd end up right!
I never played the game, but I've certainly wikipediad it XD
43the bird of the chapelWriting a horror is tough, but I suggest you work more on the narration and description. Though it may seem boring, if you pull the right words together, it'd end up right!
I never played the game, but I've certainly wikipediad it XD
2/12/2009 c1 Gem
Cliff hangers? I need to know what happens! Please Update soon. But this is is really intresting. Hope you won't stop!
Cliff hangers? I need to know what happens! Please Update soon. But this is is really intresting. Hope you won't stop!