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11/5/2010 c4 TeamEdward-aka jacobhater
Gosh this story is sooo good! Can't vet enough of it! Loved Sadies pov and yeah sheis so smart it's gonna come in handy. I feel bad for her tho with those visions she has very terrifying to say the least. Loving every bit of it =)
11/5/2010 c3 TeamEdward-aka jacobhater
Victoria! Gosh for vampires they can't put two and two together…and the bitxh comes bak…again. Gosh I just hope kill her good like real good. Loving it alot thanks.
11/5/2010 c2 TeamEdward-aka jacobhater
Poor Noah he has lot on his tiny shoulders as well as Sadue=,( and wats up with Bellas English teacher? She's just plain old mean. And now Sadie is having a nightmare I'm guessing this is just not their day…
11/4/2010 c1 TeamEdward-aka jacobhater
Yaaay sequel! loved there new house it sounds so beautiful. I wish I could live next the beach…I really wanna read wat awaits bella in highs school as a vampire haven read one till now with kids included. Really good thanks.
10/29/2010 c11 1BELIEBER110
Ok think yo should just start another story starting from the chapter that comes after the lat on?
10/13/2010 c11 detsinbaby
Well,I would love 2 give u some idea's but this is why iam not a writer. You r doing a great job. I cant wait 4 u 2 update.
9/5/2010 c11 mcamastow
I think those kids are awesome how they got back home on their own.

I would like to see Bella kick Victoria's butt and some serious two on one with Jacob, Edward and the newborns.
8/27/2010 c11 1AliceCullen0629
Update soon I really think that this story is getting good
8/13/2010 c11 Twilight Lover
This is really good! I like it so far =] also maybe some ideas you could do is have the kids grow up quickly, like still do there childhood but not have it that long, and go through them in high school with bella and edward. Also you can have there personalities change as they get older. Like Noah is the good child for the most part that does what hes told, gets good grades, ect. But Sadie on the other hand could be hannging with the wrong crowd and be sneaking out at night to parties, ditching classes, and stuff with brady. And then have bella and edward dealing with this. Also you could have school drama and stuff like that. Well i hope this helped :)
8/11/2010 c10 elidear
wow, great chapter! I love that Sadie is so outgoing and engeric, whereas Noah is more quiet and like his parents. I love that Noah just had to go with his sister to help her and the reunion was great. I love that Sadie imprinted on one of the wolves. I would have figured Seth, but mostly that is because I don't know a lot about Brady. I wonder if you will have Noah be imprinted on by Leah. That would be a great way to bring the twins back to together- somthing else they have in common- being with wolves. Plus I always felt so bad about Leah not having some, like the rest of the pack. Anyway great update, can't wait for more soon!
8/2/2010 c11 ncprovencio75
You could write about Bella and Edward wedding and honeymoon.
7/27/2010 c11 rowdyk27
Now this is just my opinion, but I think you should not focus so much on the twins and put more focus on Edward and Bella's relationship now that they have a more complex situation. How are they as parents, how they feel with the new responsibilities, and how they deal with the threats that are coming their way. I know you do have some focus on these points, but I would like to read more on this. As for the threat of Victoria, I would say have the battle happen, have some werewolf action too, and keep things mysterious with some twists and turns. Also, please don't put imprinting on Sadie. It creeped me out in Breaking Dawn with Reneesme. Hope this helps. :)
7/27/2010 c11 7Sol Spell Diggory
Oh...

Well... Let me see... If it were me writing... what would happen next...

Hum...

Maybe a little talk betwin Bella, Edward and Brady... After all, he just imprinted on their daughter in the last chap!

Or maybe Alice could have a vision... something like that!

Hope this helped a little...

Update it soon!
7/26/2010 c10 14Rose Demica
Hey, have to say, LOVE THE STORY, (this and the prequel (If thats what its called)) THEY ARE AWESOME!
7/5/2010 c10 7Twilightluver.Cullen.Obsessed
I love this story x I like how you have made and put all the emotions possible throughtout the story x can't wait for the next chapter xx
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