for The Rise of a New Sun1/7 c3 seg7533
was there an update to this? I got a notification that there was, but don't see the update
was there an update to this? I got a notification that there was, but don't see the update
10/14/2022 c3 daniella2cool
I love this it is really well written so far. I am really looking forward to your next update!
I love this it is really well written so far. I am really looking forward to your next update!
9/17/2022 c3 Stille und regen
hello, you have an interesting story here
you write well, the pace of things is pleasant
I like that Hermione's scent is pleasant and ultimately thirst-inducing. makes more sense in my mind haha
excited to read more
hello, you have an interesting story here
you write well, the pace of things is pleasant
I like that Hermione's scent is pleasant and ultimately thirst-inducing. makes more sense in my mind haha
excited to read more
8/31/2022 c1 12poppi
a suggestion to hermione’s health, bc clearly hermione will be a vampire if we are gonna have a happy ending. what if, instead of the cruacious curse having a longer effect (bc then harry and other students should have one too right), what if it’s the Mudblood scar? I used this concept in a ff I paused on writing, but u can use it if u think it works with ur plot as well.
the Mudblood curse, in my headcanon, is a curse that targets anyone who has muggle blood, so this includes halfblood. in the first war, someone also received it from Bellatrix.
Basically it’s a curse that is like cancer. It darkens their core and leaves them practically for dead, give or take 10 years of living in torture until they die. The effects of the curse is basically, sort of like, epilepsy that starts on the hands and it’s their magic that electrocutes them. It’s hard to explain, but I hope u understand the gist.
a suggestion to hermione’s health, bc clearly hermione will be a vampire if we are gonna have a happy ending. what if, instead of the cruacious curse having a longer effect (bc then harry and other students should have one too right), what if it’s the Mudblood scar? I used this concept in a ff I paused on writing, but u can use it if u think it works with ur plot as well.
the Mudblood curse, in my headcanon, is a curse that targets anyone who has muggle blood, so this includes halfblood. in the first war, someone also received it from Bellatrix.
Basically it’s a curse that is like cancer. It darkens their core and leaves them practically for dead, give or take 10 years of living in torture until they die. The effects of the curse is basically, sort of like, epilepsy that starts on the hands and it’s their magic that electrocutes them. It’s hard to explain, but I hope u understand the gist.
8/27/2022 c3 Lorelei evans
'Her scent was calming, peaceful even... soothing the beast that sat inside him.'
That right there, is a perfect description and a major distinction between Bella (a blood singer) and Hermione (possible mate?)
'Her scent was calming, peaceful even... soothing the beast that sat inside him.'
That right there, is a perfect description and a major distinction between Bella (a blood singer) and Hermione (possible mate?)
8/25/2022 c3 
21CallaRose4ever
Woo hoo I am glad she isn't his singer. : ) I wonder if all the class b vampires will find her scent calming or if it will just be Edward? loving the story and looking forward to more.
21CallaRose4everWoo hoo I am glad she isn't his singer. : ) I wonder if all the class b vampires will find her scent calming or if it will just be Edward? loving the story and looking forward to more.