for The Rise of a New Sun3/17 c2 Guest
Awesome start, hope to read more soon!
Awesome start, hope to read more soon!
3/13 c2 Guest
loving this story
loving this story
3/13 c2 RileyK1999
The way you have written Hermione and Charlie and their interactions... I LOVE it. I feel its very natural and believable and so much less awkward then Charlie with Bella because both of them are so similar and awkward around one another, haha. I think Hermione may bring a more calming feeling to Charlie because he doesn't feel the pressure to be the perfect dad who only gets to see his daughter once or twice a year
The way you have written Hermione and Charlie and their interactions... I LOVE it. I feel its very natural and believable and so much less awkward then Charlie with Bella because both of them are so similar and awkward around one another, haha. I think Hermione may bring a more calming feeling to Charlie because he doesn't feel the pressure to be the perfect dad who only gets to see his daughter once or twice a year
3/13 c2 abbey1998cd
I think having Bella come for a visit or come to live with them after the Christmas holidays would make it interesting... as long as it doesn't turn into some annoying love triangle that is lol
I think having Bella come for a visit or come to live with them after the Christmas holidays would make it interesting... as long as it doesn't turn into some annoying love triangle that is lol
3/13 c1 abbey1998cd
I really enjoyed this first chapter! I never read the first version of this story, so I can't go off of it this version is really different or not then the original before the rewrite, but what I've read in this first chapter, I am excited to read what is to come!
I really enjoyed this first chapter! I never read the first version of this story, so I can't go off of it this version is really different or not then the original before the rewrite, but what I've read in this first chapter, I am excited to read what is to come!
2/12 c2 KyloRen'sgirl213
This is different even so this crossover is one if my favorite like the one with Jasper and Hermione I forgot the name again but still I love it. So I'm looking forward to future updates
This is different even so this crossover is one if my favorite like the one with Jasper and Hermione I forgot the name again but still I love it. So I'm looking forward to future updates