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12/1/2013 c9 Sarah
Wahoo, i just check this story for the first time in like a year and saw three new chapters! I was so happy! :)
12/1/2013 c9 Guest
cant wait for more
11/17/2013 c9 Lelia
i like this story a lot!
11/17/2013 c9 Guest
very good! i like the changes you're making to the rest of the chapters as well :)
11/10/2013 c9 Black Phoenix Ranger
awesome story...keep up the great work.
11/9/2013 c9 2MoonWatersLight
Great story! It's really good! Please update soon! :D
11/7/2013 c7 7gemini-rose16
okay so in the AN at the top you have said that coz its your story that you want her to be 16 and thats how its staying...well that isnt possible if you have her down as starting hogwarts at 11 like the others but having spent 6 years there and having done months on the run which means in your story the youngest she can be is 17/18 unless you wanted her to have started hogwarts aged 9/10...you have kept everything in the harry potter world practically the same other then her age...if you want her to fit the age in twilight, wouldnt it make more sense for their ages to be upped a yr or two seeing as non of the twilight characters have the past near decade of their life already wrote out? xx
11/7/2013 c1 gemini-rose16
okay i HAVE to point this out, if this is meant to be set AFTER voldie died and they won the war then Hermione is 18 NOT 16...her birthday is 19th September which means she is a year old then everyone else in her group and when she first started Hogwarts she was a fortnight off being 12 and in the first month of her sixth year she turned 17 which means in the first few months of them hunting Horcruxes when they were planning on breaking into the Ministry she turned 18 which means that if Hermione has started the new still at the start of the new school year with the other students then she is coming up to her 19th birthday but if it is part way through the year but before winter then she is already 19...this age thing also means that she didn't stop her hobbies when she was 10 but when she was 11...other then this rant about ages, i LOVE this so far and im only on the second chapter xx
11/3/2013 c9 kitty9987
YES! An update! So happy you havent left this story to just sit! This chapter was cute, i love how she's already warming up to jacob! Is jake going to play a bigger role in the beginning (Twilight book no 1) then he did in the actual book series?
Anyways, cant wait for the next chapter!
11/2/2013 c9 macie
aw friendship already forming with Jacob! :)
11/2/2013 c7 Macie
so sad...
11/2/2013 c6 macie
ohhh yay! their talking now!
11/2/2013 c3 macie
i loved the interaction between her and edward
11/2/2013 c2 macie
sooooooo good!
11/2/2013 c1 macie
i love how this story starts! so dramatic !
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