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7/20/2012 c1 DinieLuvYunho
omg their first kiss! first kiss! kyaaaaaa soooo sweeet.. _ well my forever otp is ichiruki anw so yeah i love this... but hitsuruki is kinda cute sooo i love them tooo.. n_n
8/15/2009 c1 Kamakazzy
I' sorry, I just stopped reading to say this - I had to over my mouth with a pillow and laugh at the thought of Rukia's Zanpakuto yelling "OH HELL YES." XD That was a great idea, ahahaha.

*goes back to reading*
6/2/2009 c1 2LQTM
OMG i loved it and its not OOc a lot of peolpe cant get their persunaltizes right but u did (sorry for bad spelling) and again i loved it
2/16/2009 c1 1VanishingSoul
So perfect for ichiruki. Can't imagine their first kiss any other way.
2/16/2009 c1 31Mistress Fang
WOW. That was just. Awesome Hanya-chan. I really, really liked it... though it wasn't a HitsuRuki fic I think it was well written. cramps. it is hilarious, like roflmao hilarious. Good job! *does good guy pose with both thumbs sticking up*

-Na-chan
2/16/2009 c1 19wickedsistah1024
Great job, chee-chan! :D

That was a good read. I love how you made their zanpakutous play a role in..uh..pulling them towards each other. That was hilarious. I can only imagine Zangetsu cheering for Ichigo's first kiss. That left a funny mental image in my head. XD

I look forward to more entertaining fics from ya, chee-chan! And I'm especially psyched up for your HitsuRuki fic. XD Keep writing!

You take care!
2/16/2009 c1 7cranksta
I like the spacing you used in your writing very cleaver, good one shot
2/15/2009 c1 2chickenchickster
wow hahaha it was funny yah you did a good job I love this fanfiction

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