for gone forever4/6/2012 c1 
15Yume Disney
Dude... that's deep. I was so close to tears. You did a really good job in writing this and the two different endings were both in their own way really sad. Nice choice in song too. Gone Forever is one of my favorite songs and would definatly fit these two perfectly. Congrats again on a well-written songfic.
15Yume DisneyDude... that's deep. I was so close to tears. You did a really good job in writing this and the two different endings were both in their own way really sad. Nice choice in song too. Gone Forever is one of my favorite songs and would definatly fit these two perfectly. Congrats again on a well-written songfic.
7/15/2009 c1 lshtic
This was really really really interesting; I love the way you did the formatting and everything, but at the end it seemed a little bit much. The first part was too typical forgiveness and the last was an over the top suicide. You did provide closure though, but I would have chosen one ending or the other instead of providing two.
This was really really really interesting; I love the way you did the formatting and everything, but at the end it seemed a little bit much. The first part was too typical forgiveness and the last was an over the top suicide. You did provide closure though, but I would have chosen one ending or the other instead of providing two.