
11/10/2012 c1 Lane Brewster
please continue. i would like that very much. and you did have quite a few screw ups but i got the story down. i dont blame you. yay for continuation!
please continue. i would like that very much. and you did have quite a few screw ups but i got the story down. i dont blame you. yay for continuation!
4/6/2012 c1 kate
Please put up chapter 2 soon and hurry
Please put up chapter 2 soon and hurry
2/5/2012 c1 StoryBeta
Not to be mean but you ned a beta for your spelling and the story is great but is lacking something...Not sure what but really other than that good Job! :)
Not to be mean but you ned a beta for your spelling and the story is great but is lacking something...Not sure what but really other than that good Job! :)
5/19/2009 c1
3Yana ano baka
I think it would be better if you made it longer, stories with long chapters are nice also ^^ but I know you can do it, neh? ^^ like it! ^^

I think it would be better if you made it longer, stories with long chapters are nice also ^^ but I know you can do it, neh? ^^ like it! ^^
3/15/2009 c1 kouga's older woman
I'll be waiting to see where the story goes from here.
You might want to watch your spelling.
I'll be waiting to see where the story goes from here.
You might want to watch your spelling.