for In my wake4/28/2009 c3 Merialle
This is your first story? o_o You're very good.
So far, the plot's flowing smoothly and I like how you describe details and stuff. But how did Conan get knocked out by Gin?
Please keep up the good work!
This is your first story? o_o You're very good.
So far, the plot's flowing smoothly and I like how you describe details and stuff. But how did Conan get knocked out by Gin?
Please keep up the good work!
4/5/2009 c2 
4Digeridoodler
Oh noez D: Poor Haibara! Ouchie! Falling off a bed and breaking a rib? That sounds painful :/ I've never broken a bone so I guess I wouldn't know _ Anyways, I can't wait to read more of this :3 I'll be watching~
4DigeridoodlerOh noez D: Poor Haibara! Ouchie! Falling off a bed and breaking a rib? That sounds painful :/ I've never broken a bone so I guess I wouldn't know _ Anyways, I can't wait to read more of this :3 I'll be watching~
2/26/2009 c1 5Khail
The abrupt change from first to third person is confusing. Otherwise, it's pretty good.
5KhailThe abrupt change from first to third person is confusing. Otherwise, it's pretty good.
2/19/2009 c1 maddie88
You are so talented, I can't believe its your first time! This fic is really promising
You are so talented, I can't believe its your first time! This fic is really promising
2/17/2009 c1 empty picture frame
This is a nice story. I like the details and the way you describe ai's thoughts/emotions.
This is a nice story. I like the details and the way you describe ai's thoughts/emotions.