for Soon, My Love, Soon1/5/2010 c1 lolamissmoon
ur stories r ok,bt a bt long n tires da eyes...try dis:make many paragraphs,each consistin of maybe 2 or 3 sentences
ur stories r ok,bt a bt long n tires da eyes...try dis:make many paragraphs,each consistin of maybe 2 or 3 sentences
2/26/2009 c1 SinfulAngel26
Not too bad. I liked the way you displayed Victoria and James' relationship. Very creative! It was completely different then how I would imagine it, a little more tense,maybe? Hm, I lost my train of thought but it was interesting. ^-^
-Sin
Not too bad. I liked the way you displayed Victoria and James' relationship. Very creative! It was completely different then how I would imagine it, a little more tense,maybe? Hm, I lost my train of thought but it was interesting. ^-^
-Sin
2/18/2009 c1 
7llallyjohnsonll
I have never read a VPOV before...interesting. I like it. esp. 'pixie prophetic bitch' that was witty of you. :)
7llallyjohnsonllI have never read a VPOV before...interesting. I like it. esp. 'pixie prophetic bitch' that was witty of you. :)