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10/28/2010 c5 12ValzBrownie
Awww i thought that cute.. i just love this show
9/8/2009 c5 12DramaQueen1103
i like this story. I hope you update it.
5/24/2009 c5 4Kentauros
This is nice so far :)

I remember when you posted this some years ago to a sitcoms/Jeannie messageboard and wondered if you'd ever condintue it. Now's the opportunity and the place!

Although the story is meant to be like a diary entry, it might be best to add more breaks between paragraphs, to facilitate ease of reading. I see you've done a little of that in this last chapter. One after every paragraph would be best, with a marker of some kind (like *) between sections or parts.

Nonetheless, I hope you add to it soon :)
2/18/2009 c1 ClassicTVfan
aw...that was cute :) i liked it. keep it up!

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