for Sing for the Future3/5/2009 c5 melxx
i am loving your story danny is my favourite BH character and lauren is probably my second favourite they are my favourite pairing so its nice to read a really, really good fanfic about them! i'm really really looking foreward to scenes with danny and lauren so thank you so much for reading the reviews and taking them into consideration- you rock! i cant wait to find out how lauren will react when she finds danny, i really liked the ideas someone suggested about laurens meralgia or whatever it was a while back that might work, but just make this story what you want it to be and it will be great. Update soon- its fantastic!
i am loving your story danny is my favourite BH character and lauren is probably my second favourite they are my favourite pairing so its nice to read a really, really good fanfic about them! i'm really really looking foreward to scenes with danny and lauren so thank you so much for reading the reviews and taking them into consideration- you rock! i cant wait to find out how lauren will react when she finds danny, i really liked the ideas someone suggested about laurens meralgia or whatever it was a while back that might work, but just make this story what you want it to be and it will be great. Update soon- its fantastic!
3/5/2009 c5 xlissix
this is amazing! its really griping and i just want to read on and on and on! update soon
this is amazing! its really griping and i just want to read on and on and on! update soon
3/3/2009 c5 scarlababe02
OMG this is really good i cant wait for the next chapter!
OMG this is really good i cant wait for the next chapter!
3/3/2009 c5 britanniahighfan104
Thanks for updating, and don't worry about the wait, I know I would rather a bi of a wait and then a great chapter than a few rushed chapters cos you had no time to write, so it was DEFINATELY worth it! I really, really can't wait to find out what will happen next!
Good luck to your mum on her bike ride!
Thanks for updating, and don't worry about the wait, I know I would rather a bi of a wait and then a great chapter than a few rushed chapters cos you had no time to write, so it was DEFINATELY worth it! I really, really can't wait to find out what will happen next!
Good luck to your mum on her bike ride!
3/3/2009 c5 Laurie
WOW! This is really, really, really good and I am so glad I started reading this! Don't worry about the wait, cos it was 100% worth it, honestly! Thank you for such an amazing story, keep it up!
WOW! This is really, really, really good and I am so glad I started reading this! Don't worry about the wait, cos it was 100% worth it, honestly! Thank you for such an amazing story, keep it up!
2/28/2009 c4 britanniahighfan104
please please please update soon its been like a week and I am desperate to know what will happen! If you're not sure where to take this, just say, and anyone who's been reading this will be willing to help, I'm sure. I know I will. Update soon?
please please please update soon its been like a week and I am desperate to know what will happen! If you're not sure where to take this, just say, and anyone who's been reading this will be willing to help, I'm sure. I know I will. Update soon?
2/26/2009 c4 melxx
please please please update soon i cant wait to find out whats gunna happen next how is danny gunna explain things to lauren? i am so excited about this i am dying to find out whats in the next chapter!
please please please update soon i cant wait to find out whats gunna happen next how is danny gunna explain things to lauren? i am so excited about this i am dying to find out whats in the next chapter!
2/25/2009 c4 hsmfan4eva
please please please update soon i am dying to know what will happen! love it, keep it up!
please please please update soon i am dying to know what will happen! love it, keep it up!
2/25/2009 c4 Laurie
I have just started reading your story I would just like to let you know how much I am enjoying it! My friends and I all love Britannia High and my friend texted me yesterday to tell me to come and read your story on fanfiction. I am so glad she did, cos i am loving it! Update soon, i am desperate to read on, which is really unlike me, cos I normally hate reading, so you have acheived the impossible! More of Lauren and Danny in the next chapters?
I have just started reading your story I would just like to let you know how much I am enjoying it! My friends and I all love Britannia High and my friend texted me yesterday to tell me to come and read your story on fanfiction. I am so glad she did, cos i am loving it! Update soon, i am desperate to read on, which is really unlike me, cos I normally hate reading, so you have acheived the impossible! More of Lauren and Danny in the next chapters?
2/25/2009 c4 scarlababe02
OMG ive been having the same problems as britanniahighfan104 thank got it seems to be working now as the suspence has been killing me! your story rocks, dont think id forgotten about it i just couldnt review!:( keep writing it its so good and update soon!:))
OMG ive been having the same problems as britanniahighfan104 thank got it seems to be working now as the suspence has been killing me! your story rocks, dont think id forgotten about it i just couldnt review!:( keep writing it its so good and update soon!:))
2/25/2009 c4 britanniahighfan104
I am so sorry for not updating sooner the website wouldn't let me but I think it's fixed now! Finally! I LOVE the way this story is going it's really, really gripping and you just have to update soon! Thank you so much for sharing such and amazing story!
I am so sorry for not updating sooner the website wouldn't let me but I think it's fixed now! Finally! I LOVE the way this story is going it's really, really gripping and you just have to update soon! Thank you so much for sharing such and amazing story!
2/21/2009 c3 melxxx
your story is amazing, miles better than i could write! how is danny gonna get out of the shed? i think it'd be good if lauren helped him and was sworn to secrecy, that'd be a cool twist i think but that's just my opinion update soon i just HAVE to know what's gonna happen!
your story is amazing, miles better than i could write! how is danny gonna get out of the shed? i think it'd be good if lauren helped him and was sworn to secrecy, that'd be a cool twist i think but that's just my opinion update soon i just HAVE to know what's gonna happen!
2/21/2009 c3 britanniahighfan104
This is really, really, really good- one of the best Britannia High fanfics I've read! It's going to be a fantastic story, so please, please, please keep on undating regularly (which you have done really well so far, so keep it up!). About the dialogue, what you've done so far is good, but if you want to continue to avoid using 'said' and want to add some variety, then I suggest you try thinking about how you want the character to say the line, as this can help to let the reader know how they are feeling. Try to use words that describe this, eg. muttered, replied, laughed, snapped, sobbed, questioned, etc. Good luck!
This is really, really, really good- one of the best Britannia High fanfics I've read! It's going to be a fantastic story, so please, please, please keep on undating regularly (which you have done really well so far, so keep it up!). About the dialogue, what you've done so far is good, but if you want to continue to avoid using 'said' and want to add some variety, then I suggest you try thinking about how you want the character to say the line, as this can help to let the reader know how they are feeling. Try to use words that describe this, eg. muttered, replied, laughed, snapped, sobbed, questioned, etc. Good luck!
2/21/2009 c3 
23justimpolite
You are dead. (Claudine)
Haha tht made me laugh out loud
looking forward to more
23justimpoliteYou are dead. (Claudine)
Haha tht made me laugh out loud
looking forward to more
2/21/2009 c3 scarlababe02
i LOVE this its so good update soon im dying to know what will happen!
i LOVE this its so good update soon im dying to know what will happen!