for Sing for the Future
52/20/2009 c2 xxbubblesxx
i love your story its like the best britannia high fanfic eva! pleez pleez pleez update soon cos i so wanna know whats gonna happen love the suggestions you've been getting 2 they would work so well with whats been going on in the story so far! keep writing, i love it!
i love your story its like the best britannia high fanfic eva! pleez pleez pleez update soon cos i so wanna know whats gonna happen love the suggestions you've been getting 2 they would work so well with whats been going on in the story so far! keep writing, i love it!
2/20/2009 c2 britanniahighfan104
I love the way you are taking this- this is going to be such a great story! I can't wait to find out what will happen- update soon?
I love the way you are taking this- this is going to be such a great story! I can't wait to find out what will happen- update soon?
2/19/2009 c1 scarlababe02
this is really really good i have a suggestion you dont have to use it just an idea that i think could work really well kinda based on britanniahighfan104s idea. Basicly danny is on drugs and starts having to borrow money from the gang to pay cos its getting expensive and lauren finds out and gets really stressed and worried about him so her meralgia kicks in and she gets really ill collapsing and getting pains danny feels really bad cos he knows why shes so stressed and getting ill but hes still addicted think this could really work! good luck with the story, update soon pleez!
this is really really good i have a suggestion you dont have to use it just an idea that i think could work really well kinda based on britanniahighfan104s idea. Basicly danny is on drugs and starts having to borrow money from the gang to pay cos its getting expensive and lauren finds out and gets really stressed and worried about him so her meralgia kicks in and she gets really ill collapsing and getting pains danny feels really bad cos he knows why shes so stressed and getting ill but hes still addicted think this could really work! good luck with the story, update soon pleez!
2/19/2009 c1 hsmfan4eva
Wow this is so good! Is this a Lauren/Danny fic, cos I love those 2 together! Update soon!
Wow this is so good! Is this a Lauren/Danny fic, cos I love those 2 together! Update soon!
2/19/2009 c1 xlissix
is danny on drugs? this is so good, please please please update asap! i cant wait to find out whats gonna happen, there are so many ways this could go!
is danny on drugs? this is so good, please please please update asap! i cant wait to find out whats gonna happen, there are so many ways this could go!
2/19/2009 c1 melxxx
OMG i love your story, its really exciting i cant wait for the next chapter!;) You built the suspence really well and i so wanna read on! I love britanniahighfan104s suggestion too it would work really well with your story and show a different side to the characters... pleez?
OMG i love your story, its really exciting i cant wait for the next chapter!;) You built the suspence really well and i so wanna read on! I love britanniahighfan104s suggestion too it would work really well with your story and show a different side to the characters... pleez?
2/19/2009 c1 britanniahighfan104
this is really good so far you really build the suspense! I can't wait to find out what will happen! Can you do me a favour though and somehow make Lauren the main character in this alongside Danny cos there aren't enough fanfic stories about Danny and Lauren. No one has written anything about Lauren's meralgia parasthetica either... just a thought. I know it's supposed to be caused by stress, so maybe she could notice that Danny's acting odd, realize what's wrong, and get stressed out over it? I don't know how this would fit into what you have in mind, but I think this would make a good story, even if you did it seperately after you have finished this one. Keep writing, it's great!
this is really good so far you really build the suspense! I can't wait to find out what will happen! Can you do me a favour though and somehow make Lauren the main character in this alongside Danny cos there aren't enough fanfic stories about Danny and Lauren. No one has written anything about Lauren's meralgia parasthetica either... just a thought. I know it's supposed to be caused by stress, so maybe she could notice that Danny's acting odd, realize what's wrong, and get stressed out over it? I don't know how this would fit into what you have in mind, but I think this would make a good story, even if you did it seperately after you have finished this one. Keep writing, it's great!
2/19/2009 c1 xkissfromarosex
Good start! Can't wait to read more.
Thanks for reviewing 'Weight of the World'!
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Good start! Can't wait to read more.
Thanks for reviewing 'Weight of the World'!
:D