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9/16/2014 c1 Bye bye account
How I hate doing reviews. I prefer complimenting or bashing a story through pm. Saves the writer embarrassment and it's more personal like that. Anyway, Vegetto800 has a problem with your story. Just like you have a problem with gays, people who don't like dragons yada yada! The idea you had was pretty good. Halo/Predator thing you got going on there. (Best universes in existence!) But kind of killed the vibe. We know what the story will be about thanks to the little plot you decided to share. Change up a couple things and you ought to be good to go.
2/19/2009 c1 13Vegetto800
WOW! That had to be the most informative chapter I have ever read! Sorry dude, but what in the name of all that is evil and unholy in the Alien universe was this?

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