
9/15/2021 c11 lolurnotminyoongi
I don’t read Twilight fan fiction very often, but when I do, I always come back to this story. I’ve read it so many times at this point, I couldn’t even count. I love how different it is. This version of Edward is so much more interesting to read about. I really wish you’d update and finish the story :( this is way too good to not finish. I know it’s been a long time, but I still hold out hope that one day you’ll update.
I don’t read Twilight fan fiction very often, but when I do, I always come back to this story. I’ve read it so many times at this point, I couldn’t even count. I love how different it is. This version of Edward is so much more interesting to read about. I really wish you’d update and finish the story :( this is way too good to not finish. I know it’s been a long time, but I still hold out hope that one day you’ll update.
5/27/2021 c11 Magda95
Im pretty sure you wont finish this ff and you probably dont read your pms anymore ... but .. i was just in the mood for some darkward, so i reread to hell in a handbasket ... and boy, its still fantastic. i love this sociopath of a main character and your slightly damaged but oh so sweet bella. i wish i knew how you planned to end this story. if you ever come back to it, youll have at least one very enthousiastic reader.
thank you for sharing!
Im pretty sure you wont finish this ff and you probably dont read your pms anymore ... but .. i was just in the mood for some darkward, so i reread to hell in a handbasket ... and boy, its still fantastic. i love this sociopath of a main character and your slightly damaged but oh so sweet bella. i wish i knew how you planned to end this story. if you ever come back to it, youll have at least one very enthousiastic reader.
thank you for sharing!
2/29/2020 c11 Readaholic187
I know that it's been a long time, but I keep hoping that one day you will come back and finish this story. You have definitely left it on a cliffhanger of how Edward is responding to what is probably his first kiss. With the talk about the teeth and Bella's tongue, I can easily see that he accidentally turns Bella with the bite site being her tongue. Whether it be as a human or a newborn, Bella's relationship to Edward has a whole new aspect to explore.
I know that it's been a long time, but I keep hoping that one day you will come back and finish this story. You have definitely left it on a cliffhanger of how Edward is responding to what is probably his first kiss. With the talk about the teeth and Bella's tongue, I can easily see that he accidentally turns Bella with the bite site being her tongue. Whether it be as a human or a newborn, Bella's relationship to Edward has a whole new aspect to explore.
10/23/2017 c9 Guest
In What Universe do 17-year-olds live by themselves without adult supervision? If Bella and Edward are emancipated minors, it would make the story more credible (yeah, yeah when dealing with the supernatural "credible" in the first casualty!) if that fact were mentioned somewhere.
In What Universe do 17-year-olds live by themselves without adult supervision? If Bella and Edward are emancipated minors, it would make the story more credible (yeah, yeah when dealing with the supernatural "credible" in the first casualty!) if that fact were mentioned somewhere.
10/23/2017 c5 Guest
How come Bella accepts that Edward can hear her audibly from farther away than human? When the girls go dress shopping. on the way back, Edward recklessly passes their car and Bella is whispering to him. Is this a slip-up? By now she knows about the mind-reading, but I can't remember him saying ANYTHING about enhanced senses!
How come Bella accepts that Edward can hear her audibly from farther away than human? When the girls go dress shopping. on the way back, Edward recklessly passes their car and Bella is whispering to him. Is this a slip-up? By now she knows about the mind-reading, but I can't remember him saying ANYTHING about enhanced senses!
3/14/2017 c11 Guest
Sometimes when I lay in bed at night I like to think about stories. Ideas for stories I'd love to write or just about stories that I love and have loved. This particular story is one of them. I've followed this story for around 8 years now and every now and then I catch myself thinking about it, it's been so long I hadn't even realised that 5 years have passed since the last update. There are some fanfics that just stay with you or get inside your brain and make you wonder and this is definitely one of them. I know you said you'd lost your motivation with this story and I understand that completely, you wouldn't want to do it a disservice by bringing it to a quick ending just because you felt like you had to update it and this message is in no way urging for you to push on with something you don't feel anymore but I just had to tell you that this is a fic that I often catch myself thinking about and class it as being one of the best/ my favourites that I've read on here in the 10 years I've been reading fan fiction and I just thought I'd tell you that because it's something I'd wish to know if I was in your shoes. All the best now.
Sometimes when I lay in bed at night I like to think about stories. Ideas for stories I'd love to write or just about stories that I love and have loved. This particular story is one of them. I've followed this story for around 8 years now and every now and then I catch myself thinking about it, it's been so long I hadn't even realised that 5 years have passed since the last update. There are some fanfics that just stay with you or get inside your brain and make you wonder and this is definitely one of them. I know you said you'd lost your motivation with this story and I understand that completely, you wouldn't want to do it a disservice by bringing it to a quick ending just because you felt like you had to update it and this message is in no way urging for you to push on with something you don't feel anymore but I just had to tell you that this is a fic that I often catch myself thinking about and class it as being one of the best/ my favourites that I've read on here in the 10 years I've been reading fan fiction and I just thought I'd tell you that because it's something I'd wish to know if I was in your shoes. All the best now.
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10/5/2015 c1 Guest
This fic deserves way more reviews
This fic deserves way more reviews
8/14/2014 c11
3MythologicalMango
NOOOOO! Cliffhangers are the worst! *silent nerdrage*
I'm loving what you've done with the forks crowd,
ft

NOOOOO! Cliffhangers are the worst! *silent nerdrage*
I'm loving what you've done with the forks crowd,
ft
7/22/2014 c11 afterbrain.i
That was a great story :)
If you come around to finish it you can count on me as a reader
That was a great story :)
If you come around to finish it you can count on me as a reader
5/19/2013 c11
23Bubbles of Colours
omg... this is the best twilight fic I've ever read. And ohmy ... it's so hilarious... I can't believe Edward wants her kisses because she w
has a warm tongue and lips xdd
Directly to my favs!
lLoove,
Connie.

omg... this is the best twilight fic I've ever read. And ohmy ... it's so hilarious... I can't believe Edward wants her kisses because she w
has a warm tongue and lips xdd
Directly to my favs!
lLoove,
Connie.
12/13/2012 c11 oliveollivander
Hi,
So in your author's note you said that you're not really motivated to continue this story, but I just wanted to say that I really liked the way you changed it up in this chapter. I liked it before, I could see hints of what was bothering Bella and Edward, but I really liked that you laid it all bare in this chapter. Realistic isn't the right word, but the way Bella is putting up with Edward in this chapter - as if she knows that if she rejects him he'll kill her, but she also knows that she doesn't really want to reject him anyway because he's one of the two people she has in the world- is just really believable, because she's suffered so much loss. Also, it seems to me that now that Edward has found some quiet time in the form of Bella, he's able to be more introspective and realize that he's lonely and unhappy. I think that's another believable thing, that he's not killing Bella because he wants to experience "warmth" for as long as possible. I know its only fanfiction, but I obviously really like this story and it would be cool if you kept writing it.
Thanks
Hi,
So in your author's note you said that you're not really motivated to continue this story, but I just wanted to say that I really liked the way you changed it up in this chapter. I liked it before, I could see hints of what was bothering Bella and Edward, but I really liked that you laid it all bare in this chapter. Realistic isn't the right word, but the way Bella is putting up with Edward in this chapter - as if she knows that if she rejects him he'll kill her, but she also knows that she doesn't really want to reject him anyway because he's one of the two people she has in the world- is just really believable, because she's suffered so much loss. Also, it seems to me that now that Edward has found some quiet time in the form of Bella, he's able to be more introspective and realize that he's lonely and unhappy. I think that's another believable thing, that he's not killing Bella because he wants to experience "warmth" for as long as possible. I know its only fanfiction, but I obviously really like this story and it would be cool if you kept writing it.
Thanks
10/31/2012 c11 Guest
Please update soon. Don't leave us with such a cliffhanger!
Please update soon. Don't leave us with such a cliffhanger!
9/5/2012 c11 Guest
come on, come on. give us an end.
come on, come on. give us an end.