for Sasuke: Ninja Assassin11/26/2022 c11 Guest
Awesome AU story love love love Sasusaku anyway you can read them.
Awesome AU story love love love Sasusaku anyway you can read them.
11/26/2022 c11 Guest
Amazing
Amazing
5/29/2020 c11 
3JoyellMark Klimek
I just finished reading this fanfic. It was a great story. You did an awesome job with all your research into writing such an amazing story. Thanks for sharing this.
3JoyellMark KlimekI just finished reading this fanfic. It was a great story. You did an awesome job with all your research into writing such an amazing story. Thanks for sharing this.
5/19/2020 c1 Guest
i'm back again to read this masterpiece. idk i may have lost count as to how many times i have reread this and idk if you can see this or not but you're amazing.
i'm back again to read this masterpiece. idk i may have lost count as to how many times i have reread this and idk if you can see this or not but you're amazing.
3/9/2019 c3 9stuckonreverse
I could really feel that you put in a lot of work to your writing and i'm so thankful to read it! Cant wait for Sasuke to meet more familiar faces~
9stuckonreverseI could really feel that you put in a lot of work to your writing and i'm so thankful to read it! Cant wait for Sasuke to meet more familiar faces~
3/9/2019 c1 stuckonreverse
I'm three days and a decade late in reading this story but I'm so happy to have found this- the first chapter is promising!
I'm three days and a decade late in reading this story but I'm so happy to have found this- the first chapter is promising!
2/18/2019 c9 orifice
Well shit. That was lucky
Well shit. That was lucky
8/22/2016 c11 Chidorin
This is one helluva fanfic! I really appreciate the amount of effort and research you've put to make it realistic. And man, Naruto's "SHIKA-BOOM-BOOM" never fails to make me laugh. Anyways, thank u for this wonderful fanfic!
This is one helluva fanfic! I really appreciate the amount of effort and research you've put to make it realistic. And man, Naruto's "SHIKA-BOOM-BOOM" never fails to make me laugh. Anyways, thank u for this wonderful fanfic!
1/7/2015 c11 Akiiko-Chan
It would be a crime not to leave you a review after this well written and researched fanfic of yours! -even if im too lazy to log in, but not so much to review!- i've been captivated since chapter one. Heck, maybe since the summary but none of this would have happened if a certain person on tumblr had recommended you in the first place. Getting this kind of throwback fics from the days when we stick to their current canon personalities mixed with the details and circumstances you have displayed in this particular piece... I can you bow my head to you and thank you from the heart to share it once again, else i pretty much doubt i could have ever read this fic that made me have a really nice time. I hope the sequel is stil somewhere near your profile so i can search for it, if not, then i'll just appreciate this one for the days to come and continue to thank you because i loved every moment of it.
Besos!
It would be a crime not to leave you a review after this well written and researched fanfic of yours! -even if im too lazy to log in, but not so much to review!- i've been captivated since chapter one. Heck, maybe since the summary but none of this would have happened if a certain person on tumblr had recommended you in the first place. Getting this kind of throwback fics from the days when we stick to their current canon personalities mixed with the details and circumstances you have displayed in this particular piece... I can you bow my head to you and thank you from the heart to share it once again, else i pretty much doubt i could have ever read this fic that made me have a really nice time. I hope the sequel is stil somewhere near your profile so i can search for it, if not, then i'll just appreciate this one for the days to come and continue to thank you because i loved every moment of it.
Besos!
7/12/2013 c11 6Terahlyanwe
This is a totally quality story, and the only thing that bums me out about it is that it's fanfic! It has no resemblance to the original characters, barring vague references to Shikamaru's trademarks & Naruto's personality. I'd advise re-writing it to be all original characters, hell, practically all you'd have to do is change the names, and work on getting it published. Seriously. You'd obviously have to put in more background since reading an orginal story we won't see a name and immediately extrapolate from the Naruto-verse background what the character is likely doing or involved with, but hey, it might be worth the effort.
However, my one criticism is that the Sakura/Sasuke sex chapter felt completely fake and out of character. I was reminded of this excellent book called Shepherd of the Hills where in one scene the main male lead got into a fight, and his female friend was overcome by the heat of the moment, and she clasped her hands together and breathed "What a man!" with eyes shining. Which was completely out of character for her. I had the impression then that the author got carried away with his imagination of the ideal fight scene for the author if he was completely dominating, and that's also the impression I got from that chapter.
6TerahlyanweThis is a totally quality story, and the only thing that bums me out about it is that it's fanfic! It has no resemblance to the original characters, barring vague references to Shikamaru's trademarks & Naruto's personality. I'd advise re-writing it to be all original characters, hell, practically all you'd have to do is change the names, and work on getting it published. Seriously. You'd obviously have to put in more background since reading an orginal story we won't see a name and immediately extrapolate from the Naruto-verse background what the character is likely doing or involved with, but hey, it might be worth the effort.
However, my one criticism is that the Sakura/Sasuke sex chapter felt completely fake and out of character. I was reminded of this excellent book called Shepherd of the Hills where in one scene the main male lead got into a fight, and his female friend was overcome by the heat of the moment, and she clasped her hands together and breathed "What a man!" with eyes shining. Which was completely out of character for her. I had the impression then that the author got carried away with his imagination of the ideal fight scene for the author if he was completely dominating, and that's also the impression I got from that chapter.
2/11/2013 c11 theokinawansweetpotato
This is brilliant! I love how Sasuke is written, cold and calculating, suspicious of everything. And oh my god, Sakura is so sexy in this and I like how she's so kick ass and sasuke acknowledges it. Very well written, and I can tell you put a lot of thought in to each part, with the spy gear, assassination, character interactions, and the fight scene. Great job :D
This is brilliant! I love how Sasuke is written, cold and calculating, suspicious of everything. And oh my god, Sakura is so sexy in this and I like how she's so kick ass and sasuke acknowledges it. Very well written, and I can tell you put a lot of thought in to each part, with the spy gear, assassination, character interactions, and the fight scene. Great job :D
1/2/2013 c11 LoLi15
Absolutely mindblowing!
So detailed..Evrytime i reached the next para, i would be thinking to myself, how the hell does she knows all this? N i got my answers ;)
Absolutely mindblowing!
So detailed..Evrytime i reached the next para, i would be thinking to myself, how the hell does she knows all this? N i got my answers ;)