for Thoughts: The Wrath of the Gods8/17/2009 c1 
18Meruhen Wind
Hi. You reviewed a heck of a lot of my stories so I thought I should return the favor. :D
It's always interesting to meet somebody with an interest in actual Greek mythology (as opposed to the romantically-softened or dry, forced-to-read-this-in-literature-class stuff.) Even if it's a drabble, I thought it captured the utter helplessness of the typical, anonymous cityperson remarkably well. Greek gods weren't remarkably well-known for compassion or forgiving natures, (Zeus least of all, female-wise?) and this story would be entirely plausible. Loved the amount of description that went into this, by the way. (As gory as that...probably sounds. ._.)
Just one question-did the girl's refusal mean that Zeus brought down destruction on all of Greece, or just one random city? I wasn't entirely clear on the subject.
18Meruhen WindHi. You reviewed a heck of a lot of my stories so I thought I should return the favor. :D
It's always interesting to meet somebody with an interest in actual Greek mythology (as opposed to the romantically-softened or dry, forced-to-read-this-in-literature-class stuff.) Even if it's a drabble, I thought it captured the utter helplessness of the typical, anonymous cityperson remarkably well. Greek gods weren't remarkably well-known for compassion or forgiving natures, (Zeus least of all, female-wise?) and this story would be entirely plausible. Loved the amount of description that went into this, by the way. (As gory as that...probably sounds. ._.)
Just one question-did the girl's refusal mean that Zeus brought down destruction on all of Greece, or just one random city? I wasn't entirely clear on the subject.
7/11/2009 c1 Lissy45213
Wow. That was so good. I wish it had been longer and kept going with the girl, maybe showing where she is? Either way, it was very good. Have you thought about being a beta reader, your work is astounding with grammar and use of words. You have a wonderful vocabulary. If you did become a beta reader I would definately request you. I hope to read more of your work soon, thank you.
-Lissy
Wow. That was so good. I wish it had been longer and kept going with the girl, maybe showing where she is? Either way, it was very good. Have you thought about being a beta reader, your work is astounding with grammar and use of words. You have a wonderful vocabulary. If you did become a beta reader I would definately request you. I hope to read more of your work soon, thank you.
-Lissy