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18Glossiecherry
It was really good. Why doesnt Jasper like renesmee so much he hardly hugged her.
I mean i have read a lot of fanfiction twilight books, and all of them jasper is one of renesmees favrouite brother.
Because you-know he can relate.
But it was quite funny!.
Glossie-cherry-lip-gloss
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18GlossiecherryIt was really good. Why doesnt Jasper like renesmee so much he hardly hugged her.
I mean i have read a lot of fanfiction twilight books, and all of them jasper is one of renesmees favrouite brother.
Because you-know he can relate.
But it was quite funny!.
Glossie-cherry-lip-gloss
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glossiecherry
11/8/2009 c2 1Kisamaria
Okay, I'll review ;) but only because I really want to read alot more! Here I go:
I like how Nessie is more of a 'converse' fan lol and I thought it was sweet that she played a song for Bella -even though she didn't really give it a name- and it's sweet that she isn't really bothered about designer clothing (like Bella) though I hope she really enjoys being spoiledwithout seeming bratty...well anyway (stops waffling) plz continue, i'm curious as to where this is going. :)
1KisamariaOkay, I'll review ;) but only because I really want to read alot more! Here I go:
I like how Nessie is more of a 'converse' fan lol and I thought it was sweet that she played a song for Bella -even though she didn't really give it a name- and it's sweet that she isn't really bothered about designer clothing (like Bella) though I hope she really enjoys being spoiledwithout seeming bratty...well anyway (stops waffling) plz continue, i'm curious as to where this is going. :)
4/14/2009 c2 mnem360
Wow! this is so great. Honestly everything fits perfectly and stay true to the saga. It would make a great sequel of twilight. i really enjoyed reading it.
Wow! this is so great. Honestly everything fits perfectly and stay true to the saga. It would make a great sequel of twilight. i really enjoyed reading it.
3/24/2009 c1 Charlie The Ranga Unicorn
Love it! I liked the reunion bit, it was a little bit unemotional though. Not enough hugs and too many hi's.
Love it! I liked the reunion bit, it was a little bit unemotional though. Not enough hugs and too many hi's.
3/11/2009 c2 Charlie The Ranga Unicorn
if thats the best u can do...
Keep writing! it gets better every line! hurry, or ill have to find reading material elsewhere...
if thats the best u can do...
Keep writing! it gets better every line! hurry, or ill have to find reading material elsewhere...
3/10/2009 c2 Kaliya-Soris
OMG! I love it! I love Renesmee!or at least the Renesmee you've created. At the start, when you're explaining the chapter (the stuff in bold) do you mean its dedicated to me or did you just put it up to stop me from potentionaly ripping my hair out (lol) but anyway i love this chapter and i love the song! i could pretty much here it in my head. And i could see Bella and Edward, Alice and Jasper, and Cerlisle and Esme dancing about the room to the music.
OMG! I love it! I love Renesmee!or at least the Renesmee you've created. At the start, when you're explaining the chapter (the stuff in bold) do you mean its dedicated to me or did you just put it up to stop me from potentionaly ripping my hair out (lol) but anyway i love this chapter and i love the song! i could pretty much here it in my head. And i could see Bella and Edward, Alice and Jasper, and Cerlisle and Esme dancing about the room to the music.
2/27/2009 c1 Kaliya-Soris
Hey Brit!
I love it! Its halarios and very well writen!
sure it would probibly make more sence if I had read the last two books first but...well its just not me to wait, lol! =)
I love the image of Renesmee you've created and some how (even without reading the books first) I cant imagine her any other way.
Cant wait for more!
Mel (a.k.a. Kaliya-Soris)
Hey Brit!
I love it! Its halarios and very well writen!
sure it would probibly make more sence if I had read the last two books first but...well its just not me to wait, lol! =)
I love the image of Renesmee you've created and some how (even without reading the books first) I cant imagine her any other way.
Cant wait for more!
Mel (a.k.a. Kaliya-Soris)